One Breath
A poem about dandelions and wishes18 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
you nailed the prompt with this short poem about a child blowing on a dandelion which spreads it seeds wide as the child continues to blow on the humble lowly flower.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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you nailed the prompt with this short poem about a child blowing on a dandelion which spreads it seeds wide as the child continues to blow on the humble lowly flower.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from ESOSTINE
Your poem flows perfectly well and meets the 3-5-3 contest rules. The creativity and the imagery employed make the poem stand out. Could it mean the breath of life from God, the creator? Lol. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Your poem flows perfectly well and meets the 3-5-3 contest rules. The creativity and the imagery employed make the poem stand out. Could it mean the breath of life from God, the creator? Lol. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from Wendy G
A very cute image, and a sweet accompanying poem - yet the gardener in me worries about the number of dandelions that will result from the one breath. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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A very cute image, and a sweet accompanying poem - yet the gardener in me worries about the number of dandelions that will result from the one breath. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from artisart4u
Yes, I am glad that making a wish is still being done.
I also, like seeing the seeds in the air.
You have the correct amount of syllables for each line.
Your picture and the way you put it together are very nice. Hood luck with your
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Yes, I am glad that making a wish is still being done.
I also, like seeing the seeds in the air.
You have the correct amount of syllables for each line.
Your picture and the way you put it together are very nice. Hood luck with your
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the very nice review and the six stars. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, what a precious pic you've found!! ;) A wonderful offering for this very limited contest that says oh so much with words and imagery! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Oh, what a precious pic you've found!! ;) A wonderful offering for this very limited contest that says oh so much with words and imagery! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from Begin Again
What an adorable picture...I love it! And yes, though the brain gets foggy now and then, I still remember the joy of plucking a dandelion from the ground and wishing and hoping it would come true.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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What an adorable picture...I love it! And yes, though the brain gets foggy now and then, I still remember the joy of plucking a dandelion from the ground and wishing and hoping it would come true.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from pome lover
well that was certainly a smile maker!
Between your lovely words and that precious picture, who could resist?
It is a good 3-5-3 poem, and I hope it brings you luke in the contest.
Katharine
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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well that was certainly a smile maker!
Between your lovely words and that precious picture, who could resist?
It is a good 3-5-3 poem, and I hope it brings you luke in the contest.
Katharine
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is such a lovely poem! I love how you've captured the magic of something as simple as blowing seeds into the air. Your poem provides a sense of hope. I really enjoyed reading it. Beautiful work!
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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This is such a lovely poem! I love how you've captured the magic of something as simple as blowing seeds into the air. Your poem provides a sense of hope. I really enjoyed reading it. Beautiful work!
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you.