Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Maybe I should make friends with that witch and have the "skunks" collect the rent.... I can't even get them to answer the door or their phones. But then I'd be left desensitizing the place. Ugh!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024

Thanks Carol for these super comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Those skunks do have "scents" but obviously cannot pay rent with it. I'm guessing you do not have skunks in Australia. A funny Halloween limerick.
I think the last line has 10 syllables.

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024

Thanks Helen for these excellent comments and lovely review, blessings Roy

Comment from Kahlani

Excellent

Hi Roy, this is a great limerick. I don't think I've mastered them yet like you have. I have to learn how to add humor to my poetry. Do you have any suggestions?

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024

Yes, I would look for funny cartoons or jokes and go from there, irony is good too. So once one does a few they get easier. Thanks for the great review. Blessings Roy