Salvation
A short poem of reassuring faith.36 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
This is a brilliant entry for this particular Faith writing prompt. I feel this will rise to the top, my friend.
God bless, and best of luck in the votes.
Steve
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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This is a brilliant entry for this particular Faith writing prompt. I feel this will rise to the top, my friend.
God bless, and best of luck in the votes.
Steve
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Hello Steve.
Thank you for your positive and uplifting review. I appreciate your complimentary and meaningful words.
Thank you for the good luck wishes.
Robert
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My pleasure, Robert.
Comment from gansach
This is a wonderful entry for the My Faith Poetry competition. It is well presented with its concise and simple message that yet expresses a wealth of feeling to encompass an entire belief system. Very well done!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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This is a wonderful entry for the My Faith Poetry competition. It is well presented with its concise and simple message that yet expresses a wealth of feeling to encompass an entire belief system. Very well done!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much for your kind words about the poem. I am grateful for your support. I like saying things in short sentences and using active words. This is essentially the resume of my Christian faith.
Robert
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Robert.
This is a wonderful short definition of the Christian faith and what it means to you and all believers.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Hi Robert.
This is a wonderful short definition of the Christian faith and what it means to you and all believers.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Hello, Joan.
I am grateful for your review of this short poem and its meaning. It is certainly very short, but it is exactly how I feel. Thank you very much for the good luck wish and I hope your week is going well.
Robert
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You're welcome, Robert, on both counts. My week is going fine, thanks.
Joan
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation, Robert.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good description of what
faith means to you, and how
the Lord is an integral part of your faith.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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-Good artwork and nice presentation, Robert.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-You wrote a good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good description of what
faith means to you, and how
the Lord is an integral part of your faith.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Hello, Pam.
Thank you for reading this short poem, and thank you for the wonderful review. This poem sums up my relationship with God. I appreciate the kind comments you made about the notes and the poem. I also appreciate your good luck wish for the contest. This is probably too short to win anything.
Robert
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You are very welcome, Robert. You never know what will will a contest.
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True enough.
Comment from karenina
They say when you come to the end of the road, stop! You summed it up in 16 words. Concise and therefore powerful...
I'm thinking contest winner here, Z!
I'll keep the faith!
K
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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They say when you come to the end of the road, stop! You summed it up in 16 words. Concise and therefore powerful...
I'm thinking contest winner here, Z!
I'll keep the faith!
K
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Hello K.
George Orwell made interesting comments about writing. He said, never use a big word when a small one will do. He also believed in using the smallest number of words to express an idea. This one is really small, but it is dear to me. Thank you for your great response and by all means, keep the faith. You should be getting your book today or tomorrow.
Z
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Not today, so guess what I'll be looking for tomorrow, thanks to you!
:)
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It was sent first class postage, so I guess 3 days is about right.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the My Faith Poetry contest. Just perfect in its simplicity, just as faith should be...simple and pure. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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An excellent entry for the My Faith Poetry contest. Just perfect in its simplicity, just as faith should be...simple and pure. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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I appreciate your kind and positive review, Marilyn. I am in complete agreement with your statement. Salvation is simple and pure. Thank you for the good luck wish.
Robert
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Robert,
it's a good thing that faith is all that's required for salvation. That way no one is left out who wants to take part in that great gift. The very poor as well as the very rich can all enjoy the riches of God's grace. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Tom
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Hello Robert,
it's a good thing that faith is all that's required for salvation. That way no one is left out who wants to take part in that great gift. The very poor as well as the very rich can all enjoy the riches of God's grace. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Tom
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Hello, Tom.
I am glad to read your comments about this particular piece of writing. Salvation is truly a simple prospect. We need only accept it and it is ours eternally. Anyone can avail themselves of the offer. You are so right. Thank you for reading and commenting on this very short Poem.
Robert
Comment from DonandVicki
Since you reviewed my story, I thought I would return the favor. A good rhyming poem that I can relate to. I was a prodigal son for many years, got tired of eating pig food and came home to God.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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Since you reviewed my story, I thought I would return the favor. A good rhyming poem that I can relate to. I was a prodigal son for many years, got tired of eating pig food and came home to God.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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Thanks for the comments and good on you.
Robert
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I don't think it matters one jot to be short. All the better to absorb and retain! Your heartfelt words convey the sincerity and conviction of your spirituality. Well done, Robert, and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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I don't think it matters one jot to be short. All the better to absorb and retain! Your heartfelt words convey the sincerity and conviction of your spirituality. Well done, Robert, and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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Hey Debbie.
Thank you for your positive opinion and comments. They're very few ways I could make this message longer. It expresses exactly what I think and feel. Thank you for the good luck wish.
Robert
Comment from ESOSTINE
The poem, though very rich and deep in meaning, is succinctly penned to express how your faith leads you to your God in simple terms. Well done, dear Robert. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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The poem, though very rich and deep in meaning, is succinctly penned to express how your faith leads you to your God in simple terms. Well done, dear Robert. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for your positive and thoughtful comments. Sometimes the simplest words are the best. Thank you for your good luck wishes.
Robert