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Two very real women in not so real situation.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this addition to Rachelle's and Gretchen's story with us. I enjoyed reading. I've been trying to come up with something to share, but my muse is still at the food fight and not assisting me at all.

and It was the thrill of a lifetime! (it)

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. I didn't do enough outrageous and crazy in my version. The most outrageous versions seem to be getting the most reviews, so think outrageous. judi
Comment from patcelaw
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This has been a fun Friday to be a part of, and I enjoyed very much listening to your version of it as well. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Also, wish you a very wonderful week and may God bless you.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. I think a FS convention would be a great idea, although I probably wouldn't be able to attend. I think some of the members got a little too carried away with all the festivities. judi
Comment from Begin Again
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You've done a wonderful job with the convention party and what all our FanStorian friends did while they were there visiting the States. Each one had something special to offer. Well done! Hope to see you next year!!!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. It would be wonderful to have such a wonderful gathering. I'd probably be cowering in a corner, intimidated by all the great talent surrounding me. judi
reply by Begin Again on 28-Oct-2024
    Your talent is awesome too. We each have something individual and defined to offer. that's what makes the site so wonderful...something new to experience each day.
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
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I think you would always win the script, except you didn't enter it, I love this Judi, you introduced something nobody thought of dear girl. I think you will stand a chance of winning a prize, a super post Judi, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : I apologised to Bar(b)ara Wilkey. 2: Pam (Lansdale) won for short story, Lonsdale,

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
    Thanks for your review and comments. It would be a wonderful gathering. I wouldn't be up for making such a long trip myself, but it would be great to dream about it. Thanks for the notes, and I think I've corrected. judi
reply by royowen on 28-Oct-2024
    Yep, that's true Judi
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I enjoyed your version of events here Judi and I am honoured that I had a mention in your story. I loved your approach and seeing the even through your eyes Judi, there are so many fabulous writers on Fanstory that it was difficult to mention just a few. I really enjoyed your post and Rachelle and Gretchen will enjoy your post too, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. I'm sure you looked your stylish best at the event. What a gala occasion! judi
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Judi,
It sounds like I missed quite a party. I'm afraid I'd stand out like a sore thumb though. I don't even like it when the family makes a big deal out of my birthday. I'd sure like to meet all the authors on this site though. If only I bought lottery tickets and won, I could bring everyone to Alaska and house and feed them. For that party though, flannel shirts and jeans would be the dress code. Thanks for sharing gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. I'd probably be cowering in a corner somewhere if I actually attended such an event. I'd be in awe of all that talent. judi
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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Is this real or you made this up? If it is real, I feel offended that I wasn't invited to this gala. It doesn't looks it's a true event because people like Roy Owen don't come to the US very easily from Australia. I'm planning to visit there soon.

Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
    Thanks for your review and comments. Yes, this was all made up, so the guests could have come from anywhere, even Mars. If there had been a real convention, you would have received an invitation! Enjoy your visit to Australia. judi
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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I'm delighted you found it a really great convention after the food fight and strippers. And so many awards to so many deserving writers. You have convinced us all that we really need to have another convention next year.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. I'm glad you found this. It was based on Rachelle's delightful novel about going to a FS convention. Maybe her book will give Tom the idea. I doubt that I would be able to attend even such a delightful gathering. Too many health issues. judi
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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It would seem that Rachelle and Gretchen's party was the one to be at for a night of fun at the FanStory convention. And it seems you took your matador's cape with you and used it wisely. LOL
Good one Judi.

valda

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Thanks a bunch for your review and those great comments. Wouldn't it be great to attend such a convention. There are so many FS members I'd love to meet. judi
Comment from lancellot
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A well-crafted chapter of fiction. I'm sure the FanStory members will enjoy this. It sounds like a dream come true for many, and such a thing would be more than a lifetime worth of fun.

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. I would have enjoyed meeting you at such an occasion. In real life, I'm afraid my traveling is limited. judi