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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
You had everyone and their brother at your party and oh boy it sounded like a lot of fun. It sure sounds like we have a well-rounded group in many artistic abilities, not just writing. And I was going to move myself to the poker table and see if they'd let me join. Thanks for sharing the fun.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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You had everyone and their brother at your party and oh boy it sounded like a lot of fun. It sure sounds like we have a well-rounded group in many artistic abilities, not just writing. And I was going to move myself to the poker table and see if they'd let me join. Thanks for sharing the fun.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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I almost put you there but didn't know if that would unnerve the guys. Lol. Thanks for reviewing, Marilyn!
Hugs!
Comment from nomi338
I love this. Maybe, just maybe one day there might actually be a party where some of the names mentioned may actually meet up and partake of an actual festivity. I would give almost anything to be present.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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I love this. Maybe, just maybe one day there might actually be a party where some of the names mentioned may actually meet up and partake of an actual festivity. I would give almost anything to be present.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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It would be fun! Thanks so much, Nomi! At least, I'm glad we met here online!
Hugs!
Comment from royowen
Boy! Helen, you included a few that have been 'gone' awhile, Dean, Phylis and a couple, you made me feel a little nostalgic for the earlier years that I was here. It shows how limited our time on earth is, so we should make the best of it, I feel guilty not adding to the contributions here, nobody, but nobody have written as many as you. You are amazing Helen, Beautifully Written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Boy! Helen, you included a few that have been 'gone' awhile, Dean, Phylis and a couple, you made me feel a little nostalgic for the earlier years that I was here. It shows how limited our time on earth is, so we should make the best of it, I feel guilty not adding to the contributions here, nobody, but nobody have written as many as you. You are amazing Helen, Beautifully Written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much, Roy! I wanted to include everyone but I still missed some! The three who are in Heaven, I had to mention because it wouldn't be our Fanstory experience without them. Thanks for the many stars!
Hugs!
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That's true
Comment from marilyn quillen
i love how you guys all do these stories, it so neat they all build off of each others, I really enjoy reading all of them. very well-writtenthey all just flow from one right into the next. you all should do a new year party one too
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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i love how you guys all do these stories, it so neat they all build off of each others, I really enjoy reading all of them. very well-writtenthey all just flow from one right into the next. you all should do a new year party one too
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much for reviewing! Blessings!
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, Helen, you didn't miss a thing! A delightful, imaginative write. You have the FanStonians personalities and gifts down pat. I've actually been helping a few sight impared writers with tips for writing. I get asked about that all the time.
Your post caused me to really miss Phyllis, Dean, Michael, August and Reconciled. It seems like they were here just yesterday. Time flies on FanStory. Thank you for including me in the book.
Sending along my very best today as always.
Love,
Sal Xos
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Oh, Helen, you didn't miss a thing! A delightful, imaginative write. You have the FanStonians personalities and gifts down pat. I've actually been helping a few sight impared writers with tips for writing. I get asked about that all the time.
Your post caused me to really miss Phyllis, Dean, Michael, August and Reconciled. It seems like they were here just yesterday. Time flies on FanStory. Thank you for including me in the book.
Sending along my very best today as always.
Love,
Sal Xos
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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I still missed a lot no matter how hard I tried to remember everyone I interact with! Thanks so much for remembering dear ones - I miss Jannypan and Nancy and Gert -- I could go on. Sigh.
Hugs and blessings to you, Sally!
Comment from jmdg1954
Wowza, wowza, WOWZA!!!
I'm so glad to have a six star left in my knife kit to reward to this incredible post.
From beginning to the end you captured everyone and grouped them perfectly... with me conjuring up some after food-fight delights!
The best part was when and how you included, Phyllis, Dean and Micheal all three who were on the site in my first go round and who are sorely missed. Great to have them included.
Great twist at the end as well... it would've taken me two weeks to write this and it took you one day!
Excellent.
John
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Wowza, wowza, WOWZA!!!
I'm so glad to have a six star left in my knife kit to reward to this incredible post.
From beginning to the end you captured everyone and grouped them perfectly... with me conjuring up some after food-fight delights!
The best part was when and how you included, Phyllis, Dean and Micheal all three who were on the site in my first go round and who are sorely missed. Great to have them included.
Great twist at the end as well... it would've taken me two weeks to write this and it took you one day!
Excellent.
John
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much, John! Your review means a lot to me and I do miss your wonderful culinary posts!
Hugs!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I had the review all written out now it's gone and got lost somewhere. It's hard to get that back once you have written something. I think I said that at some point one of the lines was going to draw the reader in because it was about the craziness of the meal. And at another one I was saying yay for Jim.
I guess this will have to do. It's too bad but it's not as tightly wrapped as I wrote it originally.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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I had the review all written out now it's gone and got lost somewhere. It's hard to get that back once you have written something. I think I said that at some point one of the lines was going to draw the reader in because it was about the craziness of the meal. And at another one I was saying yay for Jim.
I guess this will have to do. It's too bad but it's not as tightly wrapped as I wrote it originally.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Sorry you lost your review! That happens to me as I swap between tabs and sometimes lose my replies!
Thanks for reviewing, Liz!
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! What a fun account and what has to be the best conclusion I've read thus far -- great job, my lady! ;) Thanx for sharing another big smile for everyone! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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LOL!! What a fun account and what has to be the best conclusion I've read thus far -- great job, my lady! ;) Thanx for sharing another big smile for everyone! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much, Yvette! I'm so glad you returned! We have lost so many dear friends who either left FS or left Earth.
Hugs!
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This was outstanding for the way you included so very many Fanstorians, including using your knowledge about them and their writing. I dreamed one night along time ago, before even you became my good friend, that there was a fan Story meeting at your huge house, and I talked to you.
So glad you enjoyed your company!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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This was outstanding for the way you included so very many Fanstorians, including using your knowledge about them and their writing. I dreamed one night along time ago, before even you became my good friend, that there was a fan Story meeting at your huge house, and I talked to you.
So glad you enjoyed your company!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Aww! I love your dream. In the mansions in Heaven, we will definitely meet and learn so much more about how to praise God better. Thanks for the dream and the super six stars, Verna!
Hugs!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing your version of what took place at this party. I enjoyed reading and you mentioned FanStorians present and past that I'd missed. I was afraid I'd forgotten some and I did. I was worried about missing people and hurting their feelings.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thank you for sharing your version of what took place at this party. I enjoyed reading and you mentioned FanStorians present and past that I'd missed. I was afraid I'd forgotten some and I did. I was worried about missing people and hurting their feelings.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Me, too!! It's so hard to create a complete list of all the dear people we appreciate here!
Thanks for reviewing, Barbara! Hugs!