Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Don, so good to see you...

those were the days...when it didn't
matter where you cocooned into each
others arms...as long as you were both
feeling the vibes...

I love your poem...very well written my sweet friend...
and the picture...says it all...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2024

Thank you Linda, your review means a lot to me. Don

reply by l.raven on 11-Nov-2024

your so very welcome Don...love xxoo

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hey Don.
This is really a cool graphic you found for this poem. It is an interesting love story with some fascinating key lines. I like your totally unexpected closing line. That was a little twist on the love story. Nice job.
Robert

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Thank you Robert so very much.

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 10-Nov-2024

You're welcome.

Comment from Nicki.B

Excellent

This is just the sweetest poem. And so much humuor within also that I really enjoyed and gave me a good giggle. Looks like you really had fun with this! Good luck with the contest, well done!
Best Wishes
Nicki

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Thank you Niki, your review touched my heart.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Love is a wonderful thing, and lasting memories warm the heart even when he's gone. I love your love story in the poem and certainly wish I could go their again. Well written and definitely enjoyed.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

You are always so kind, Carol.

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

This is an adorable love story poem depicting the thoughts and feeling of young love. As an older lady married for years, your poem reminds me of how innocently a love affair that can last a lifetime begins. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Thank you Butterfly, you are very kind.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very well written, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. You have expressed something that I'm sure sticks in your mind as your memory if this is truly happened to you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Thank you so very much Patricia.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Indeed that is a marvellous thing, young love it is the most mercurial of love one can experience, but I don't think I really knew what love was until I was prepared, if necessary to sacrifice for my loved ones, beautifully written D&V, bless you, Roy

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

You are very kind Roy, thank you.

reply by royowen on 10-Nov-2024

Welcome

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a romantic encounter in the rain, and I felt the intense connections between these newly formed lovers who are oblivious to being wet! A fine poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Thank you so much Dolly, I always appreciate your kind reviews.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Sounds like a love story that will stand against all storms! I enjoyed this sweet story told in rhyme. It reminds me of that song about two sharing an umbrella and falling in love. Best wishes in the contest!
Suggestion:
I did whole heartdly agree (wholeheartedly)

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Thank you so very much.

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao !

I agree you never know these days.. gay, straight or even bother.

Cute story , I like how the urgency grew ..

great rhyme made the read exciting.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2024

Thank you so much.