Shadow Man
A silly poem about an imaginary man14 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Shadow Man, presented with five quatrains, creates and makes spooky this idea of a shadow creeping about when we give it the power in the sunlight.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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This poem, Shadow Man, presented with five quatrains, creates and makes spooky this idea of a shadow creeping about when we give it the power in the sunlight.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Bill,
Thank you for the kind review.
Cecilia
Comment from Sally Law
A wonderful poem of the shadow man, Cecilia. Shadows imply mystery, danger and peril. My own shadow implies--I'm here. Dogs are more intuitive to it all, shadows and the substance. A fine offering in free verse.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal :)) xoxo
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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A wonderful poem of the shadow man, Cecilia. Shadows imply mystery, danger and peril. My own shadow implies--I'm here. Dogs are more intuitive to it all, shadows and the substance. A fine offering in free verse.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal :)) xoxo
Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Thank you Sal. I wonder what they bark at sometimes? It's unnerving some days.
Cecilia xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Dogs have a heightened sense of hearing and even just a bid rustling the leaves in trees will cause them to bark. They are good guard dogs really. The shadows of men or ghosts should not be feared, it is only really people who harm us. A poignant post Cecilia fear can cause us to feel terror at times, love Dolly x
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Dogs have a heightened sense of hearing and even just a bid rustling the leaves in trees will cause them to bark. They are good guard dogs really. The shadows of men or ghosts should not be feared, it is only really people who harm us. A poignant post Cecilia fear can cause us to feel terror at times, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Dolly,
Thank you for the kind review. Kratos loves to chase the rabbits, but he is at a disadvantage. Most of the time there is a fence between him and the rabbit. Yes, they have great hearing and sometimes I just don't what they bark at.
Cecilia xoxo
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really love the eerie feeling you've created with "Shadow Man." I was hooked by how you build the suspense with every line. Especially how you keep him lurking in the shadows. The warning to "watch your back" gave me chills! Great work! Your poem delivers that spooky, unsettling feel. Keep it up!
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I really love the eerie feeling you've created with "Shadow Man." I was hooked by how you build the suspense with every line. Especially how you keep him lurking in the shadows. The warning to "watch your back" gave me chills! Great work! Your poem delivers that spooky, unsettling feel. Keep it up!
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2024
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Michael,
Thank you so much for the awesome review.
Cecilia