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Comment from GWHARGIS
This had such an innocent feel to it. It reminded me of a time when just seeing your crush and having him smile at you was the best thing to ever happen. Beautiful mood set here. Gretchen
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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This had such an innocent feel to it. It reminded me of a time when just seeing your crush and having him smile at you was the best thing to ever happen. Beautiful mood set here. Gretchen
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Sweet Slumber, has the proper formatting and finds the lovely woman dreaming of being even more alluring to the one for whom she longs. .
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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This haiku, Sweet Slumber, has the proper formatting and finds the lovely woman dreaming of being even more alluring to the one for whom she longs. .
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Gypsy,
This is a beautiful poem. I love the picture you chose. It gives the reader a visual of the poem. I like the line, "neath the golden moon."
Well done my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Gypsy,
This is a beautiful poem. I love the picture you chose. It gives the reader a visual of the poem. I like the line, "neath the golden moon."
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Cecilia
Gypsy hugs 😊
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Gypsy,
You are most welcome
Cecilia
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful haiku poem with well placed caesura that strengthens the essence of the poem. Great imagery and picture, casting light on the power of our sweet dreams. Thanks for sharing.
RJ
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Beautiful haiku poem with well placed caesura that strengthens the essence of the poem. Great imagery and picture, casting light on the power of our sweet dreams. Thanks for sharing.
RJ
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy hugs 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from Lana Marie
This is so beautiful, so sweet and subtle. I love the implication that this beautiful young soul has!
You're very talented!
.."dreaming to be
the light in your eyes"
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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This is so beautiful, so sweet and subtle. I love the implication that this beautiful young soul has!
You're very talented!
.."dreaming to be
the light in your eyes"
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Lana. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Another gorgeous presentation of coordinating colors for your poem! I liked that even while the eyes are closed in sleep, she dreams of being the "light" in his eyes.
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Another gorgeous presentation of coordinating colors for your poem! I liked that even while the eyes are closed in sleep, she dreams of being the "light" in his eyes.
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Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you are having a good night.
Love
Marival ❤️
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I'm good. Way behind in reviewing as I had to do some winterizing in the yard. 💖