Lettica Meets Her match
Two of a Kind20 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
Probably harder to north twins than it was to ever north the internet. Ha!
Fun read. Having six kids was tough but I can not imagine having two infants at the same time. Eesh!
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Probably harder to north twins than it was to ever north the internet. Ha!
Fun read. Having six kids was tough but I can not imagine having two infants at the same time. Eesh!
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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I had two boys four years apart. And with all my health issues it was plenty. I love my boys and we managed pretty well. Obstacles were there to be overcome. These smarty smart twins will be a pickle!
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Comment from Neonewman
This is Brilliant, Young Lady! This has to be the beginning of NOVEL. So much can be done with this little gem. SIXES all the way, I foresee.
One small glitch.
I tell them to let go and let themselves have the piece (peace) and joy that the rest of their body has.
What a brilliant story, Karen. We all need to know what happens with the twins.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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This is Brilliant, Young Lady! This has to be the beginning of NOVEL. So much can be done with this little gem. SIXES all the way, I foresee.
One small glitch.
I tell them to let go and let themselves have the piece (peace) and joy that the rest of their body has.
What a brilliant story, Karen. We all need to know what happens with the twins.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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I will edit. Thanks for the read. How did I miss that?
HOHOHO :-)
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HOHOHO, back, Karen. I love this time of the year.
Comment from patcelaw
The story is very well written and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It moves along very well and it keeps the readers attention. I wish you the very best for your week and may you have a wonderful day. May God bless you. Merry Christmas. Patricia.
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The story is very well written and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It moves along very well and it keeps the readers attention. I wish you the very best for your week and may you have a wonderful day. May God bless you. Merry Christmas. Patricia.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thanks for the read,
Updates: Marilyn Hamilton slipped on the ice and is in the hospital with a broken hip. Put her on your best wishes list please.
Da Mommy (Yvonne) is back in the nursing home, and Debi P.M. is soon to be back in the hospital for her cornea replacement. Jessie James Doty is recuperating from his spinal surgery. Patcelaw is recuperating from her heart surgery. Jim Vecchio is having multiple biopsy's soon. That's all the new stuff I know. I pass this along . Our lists keep getting longer. Love to you and yours.Karen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this story with us. I enjoyed reading and would like to read more about these two women, now four.
At first it was interesting and nice, Then, It seemed that everyone in that building came in to look at her. (maybe a period after 'nice.')
Her Mom was also psychic. (mom)
Why do an awful lot of people always expect others to make the sacrifice for them? (Great question!!!!)
She hustled me into the back room,locked the door, (space the comma)
I asked her what happened. "She said I have to ask you a question sweetie. Last month when you went out on your date (I asked her what happened. She said, "I have to ask you a question sweetie. Last month when you went out on your date BUT this should probably be put in two dialogues)
I asked, "Do you have any guesses" (guesses?")
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you for sharing this story with us. I enjoyed reading and would like to read more about these two women, now four.
At first it was interesting and nice, Then, It seemed that everyone in that building came in to look at her. (maybe a period after 'nice.')
Her Mom was also psychic. (mom)
Why do an awful lot of people always expect others to make the sacrifice for them? (Great question!!!!)
She hustled me into the back room,locked the door, (space the comma)
I asked her what happened. "She said I have to ask you a question sweetie. Last month when you went out on your date (I asked her what happened. She said, "I have to ask you a question sweetie. Last month when you went out on your date BUT this should probably be put in two dialogues)
I asked, "Do you have any guesses" (guesses?")
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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I edited and found 3 more. Thanks for the read.
Updates: Marilyn Hamilton slipped on the ice and is in the hospital with a broken hip. Put her on your best wishes list please.
Da Mommy (Yvonne) is back in the nursing home, and Debi P.M. is soon to be back in the hospital for her cornea replacement. Jessie James Doty is recuperating from his spinal surgery. Patcelaw is recuperating from her heart surgery. Jim Vecchio is having multiple biopsy's soon. That's all the new stuff I know. I pass this along . Our lists keep getting longer. Love to you and yours.Karen
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Thank you for passing it along. I will continue to pray.
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Comment from Begin Again
Oh, Karen, I so wish I had a six. You are on top of the heap this morning with this wonderful and delicious story. Two girls with brilliant brains and smart mom and grandmother too! How thrilling their adventures could be if they can keep the government and others out of their business. Hope you are going to write more about these lovely ladies.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Oh, Karen, I so wish I had a six. You are on top of the heap this morning with this wonderful and delicious story. Two girls with brilliant brains and smart mom and grandmother too! How thrilling their adventures could be if they can keep the government and others out of their business. Hope you are going to write more about these lovely ladies.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thanks for the read. I hope your holidays are filled with joy. Marilyn Hamilton slipped on the ice and is in the hospital with a broken hip. Put her on your best wishes list please.
Da Mommy (Yvonne) is back in the nursing home, and Debi P.M. is soon to be back in the hospital for her cornea replacement. Jessie James Doty is recuperating from his spinal surgery. Patcelaw is recuperating from her heart surgery. Jim Vecchio is having multiple biopsy's soon. That's all the new stuff I know. I pass this along . Our lists keep getting longer. Love to you and yours.Karen
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How in heavens do you know all this? My heart is heavy as I think of all these friends facing such grief during the holiday season. I shall offer my prayers and good thoughts to each and every one of them for a speedy recovery. Thank you for sharing...Hope Marilyn isn't in the hospital long, but recovery from a hip isn't easy. Take care of yourself so you aren't on the list.... Love ya, Carol
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People tell me stuff. When my sisters take me out, they watch me like a hawk. It is sweet. Love to you and yours. Karen
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Karen, loved the story and wanted to do a review but am going to have to cheat and use up my digits as I am currently in the hospital and not up to a huge review. Will talk later. ---------------
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Karen, loved the story and wanted to do a review but am going to have to cheat and use up my digits as I am currently in the hospital and not up to a huge review. Will talk later. ---------------
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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You don't worry about me. Get better so you can be back at what you love. I am wishing for a swift and east recovery for you sweetie pie. I will tell everyone I know so the energy can flow. Karen
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Wow, Karen! That was excellent! Two girls with incredible brains, that will be a lot of fun, and a lot of hard work for mum and grandmum. Lol. But they would be targeted by those government people if their birth is ever found out. I really enjoyed this, and I do hope you write more of it. Well done, my clever friend. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Wow, Karen! That was excellent! Two girls with incredible brains, that will be a lot of fun, and a lot of hard work for mum and grandmum. Lol. But they would be targeted by those government people if their birth is ever found out. I really enjoyed this, and I do hope you write more of it. Well done, my clever friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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I put it in as a book. I think it will be more comedy than intrigue. I have several books in stages. One of these days I might actually end up with a novel! LOL
Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from Tim Margetts
This is good, Karen
The story flows really well and kept my attention from beginning to end.
So is this the start of a book?
I do really hope so as I want to read more :)
Tim x
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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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This is good, Karen
The story flows really well and kept my attention from beginning to end.
So is this the start of a book?
I do really hope so as I want to read more :)
Tim x
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thanks for the read. I had half a story for a long time. But when my computer had a hissy fit and ate my pictures and writings. I had to add them back in one at a time. And the pictures I had to build back up brand new. So, wkhen I am adding the work back in I am editing and completing work. Slow going. So I am not as prolific as I once was. I used to pop out two a day.
I have several stories in various stages. Thanks again.
Karen
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That sounds like a real ball ache, good job on working at getting it back together.
Tim x
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I am stubborn. I do not go quietly into that good night.
Karen
Comment from Tom Horonzy
What a terrific piece, and a reminder that I once thought the world revolved around me.
As usual, you found another red-headed woman's picture. Very nice, and if i wasn;t blessed in marriage a dream-like girl, she is. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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What a terrific piece, and a reminder that I once thought the world revolved around me.
As usual, you found another red-headed woman's picture. Very nice, and if i wasn;t blessed in marriage a dream-like girl, she is. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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I am a redhead, so I pick redheads. Seems fair to me. Thanks for the six. I will probably write more of this. More humor than intrigue I would think. Karen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I had a great review done... and then lost it with an errant button click. grrrrr!
Her mom had a good memory but she could not remember everything like she could. - This sentence could use a name in place of the last 'she'.
Is the photo you? The resemblance to your profile sketch is striking.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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I had a great review done... and then lost it with an errant button click. grrrrr!
Her mom had a good memory but she could not remember everything like she could. - This sentence could use a name in place of the last 'she'.
Is the photo you? The resemblance to your profile sketch is striking.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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It is not me currently. But, I think all these women are kind of parts of me. I appreciate the read. I will go back and edit. Karen