The Kirby Case - Part 4
Detective Mike Brady continues to look for a serial killer21 total reviews
Comment from Michele Harber
I like the way you're adding a mystery (the nail salon) within a mystery. It adds an extra layer of interest to an already interesting story. Again, your crime knowledge seems very believable (at least to someone like me, who's watched many police procedurals on TV).
The one thing I'm missing in the story, which I suspect you'll include in later chapters, is the introduction of possible/likely suspects, which, of course, leads to red herrings.
I'm enjoying this mystery journey, and hope we don't get to the end any time soon.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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I like the way you're adding a mystery (the nail salon) within a mystery. It adds an extra layer of interest to an already interesting story. Again, your crime knowledge seems very believable (at least to someone like me, who's watched many police procedurals on TV).
The one thing I'm missing in the story, which I suspect you'll include in later chapters, is the introduction of possible/likely suspects, which, of course, leads to red herrings.
I'm enjoying this mystery journey, and hope we don't get to the end any time soon.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Hi Michele. No, I have not added suspects. In fact, the suspect is not known till near the end of the series.
Thanks for the wonderful review
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You're very welcome, and I'll be waiting for the reveal.
Comment from Shanbreen
I am glad they found the location by the matching sap the tree produced and the footprints on the forest floor. But while the mystery deepens, I am curious to know what the cameras will show.
And so the mystery deepens. =)
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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I am glad they found the location by the matching sap the tree produced and the footprints on the forest floor. But while the mystery deepens, I am curious to know what the cameras will show.
And so the mystery deepens. =)
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Hi my friend. Thank you for this wonderful review.
Comment from Darlene BoClair
In Kirby field I am now curious about the age and names of the female women victims. This I hope will bring more of a human experience to your readers. Will we after all the others details be able to crack the case before the ending?
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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In Kirby field I am now curious about the age and names of the female women victims. This I hope will bring more of a human experience to your readers. Will we after all the others details be able to crack the case before the ending?
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Hi Darlene, you accumulated to the chapter 5 in this series where I focused on the victims. So you are a part of this series as well.
Thanks for the great review
Comment from Tim Margetts
Well the nail salon was a long shot as if it's anything like near where I live, they are there by the dozen and it doesn't mean a thing if a girl does her own nails.
Looking forward to seeing where this leads next, Pam.
Tim x
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Well the nail salon was a long shot as if it's anything like near where I live, they are there by the dozen and it doesn't mean a thing if a girl does her own nails.
Looking forward to seeing where this leads next, Pam.
Tim x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Tim for a wonderful review
Comment from Begin Again
If I had any sixes, I would have given them to you for every chapter (oops - poem) you've post. Your ability to make it easy to read, yet still follow the story and give us the clues is outstanding. Take a bow! You deserve it and much more.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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If I had any sixes, I would have given them to you for every chapter (oops - poem) you've post. Your ability to make it easy to read, yet still follow the story and give us the clues is outstanding. Take a bow! You deserve it and much more.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Carol for your wonderful, encouraging and complementary review and for the virtual six stars
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Pam,
I like the unique way you tell a murder mystery using a poetic form.
It's easy to read (for me) and I want to know the secret of this mystery.
Great story, Pam.
Cindy
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Pam,
I like the unique way you tell a murder mystery using a poetic form.
It's easy to read (for me) and I want to know the secret of this mystery.
Great story, Pam.
Cindy
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Cindy for a great review
Comment from Teri7
Pam, This is a good part 4 story in a poem! You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the picture you chose. Thanks for sharing. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Pam, This is a good part 4 story in a poem! You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the picture you chose. Thanks for sharing. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Blessings to you as well. Thanks for the great review.
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you are so welcome!
Comment from Ulla
This absolutely amazing, Pam. I just wish that I had a six star for you. The story is taking us along the detectives and how they find clues to her last hours of life. I can't wait to reading on. How wonderfully you spin a tale within a poem. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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This absolutely amazing, Pam. I just wish that I had a six star for you. The story is taking us along the detectives and how they find clues to her last hours of life. I can't wait to reading on. How wonderfully you spin a tale within a poem. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Kirby Case Part 4, amasses even more evidence of the girls movements and from where to where she was moved. Still. no key piece to locate a suspect. Infuriating.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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This poem, The Kirby Case Part 4, amasses even more evidence of the girls movements and from where to where she was moved. Still. no key piece to locate a suspect. Infuriating.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your great review
Comment from barbara.wilkey
They found the show store but not the nail salon. They've matched the tree sap. Hopefully more clues will be found. Again, you're doing a great job telling this story is poetic form.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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They found the show store but not the nail salon. They've matched the tree sap. Hopefully more clues will be found. Again, you're doing a great job telling this story is poetic form.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Barbara for the great review
