Veil of Secrets
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Comment from Tim Margetts
This is eleventy stories mixed up in a growing cauldron of bubbling conspiracies.
I love it, Carol.
I do so enjoy the way you take a thread, add another, tangle them up then tie a third and a fourth into the knot.
I look forward to being able to view the final tapestry.
Tim x
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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This is eleventy stories mixed up in a growing cauldron of bubbling conspiracies.
I love it, Carol.
I do so enjoy the way you take a thread, add another, tangle them up then tie a third and a fourth into the knot.
I look forward to being able to view the final tapestry.
Tim x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Now you know the secret of my writing...My mother and grandmother always wanted me to crochet and knit...it just wasn't my style. So I told my mother that I did it with my story lines...LOL Like you said, a thread here, a thread there, tie a knot and bring it all together.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Rebecca needs Eleanor and Garth right now. This Trevor isn't a good guy. I can't wait to learn more about Antonio. This is another good write.
His voice was ragged. (His voice ragged. I want to put a comma there but not sure, but omit the 'was' for sure.)
Eleanor stepped closer, her voice softening. "You came here. (softening,)
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Rebecca needs Eleanor and Garth right now. This Trevor isn't a good guy. I can't wait to learn more about Antonio. This is another good write.
His voice was ragged. (His voice ragged. I want to put a comma there but not sure, but omit the 'was' for sure.)
Eleanor stepped closer, her voice softening. "You came here. (softening,)
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Antonio's determination against Cornelius is so well told. I could almost feel the tension crackling between them. The contrast between Grayson's charm and Eleanor's distrust builds the mystery even more. Your characters are interesting and keeping me hooked. You've set up a world brimming with secrets. I can't wait to see how it unfolds!
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Antonio's determination against Cornelius is so well told. I could almost feel the tension crackling between them. The contrast between Grayson's charm and Eleanor's distrust builds the mystery even more. Your characters are interesting and keeping me hooked. You've set up a world brimming with secrets. I can't wait to see how it unfolds!
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank, Michawl. I am thrilled to see you returning and enjoying the story. It's a bit more complicated than the other ones, but I think we can work our way through it, especially when every thing ties together... Thanks again.
Smiles, Carol
