BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 76 "Winter's Night "Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Wow That owl jumped out at me. It was supported by the perfect words and perfect syllables for the Renga book. Great job! I did one earlier and I hope to do another soon. I enjoyed reviewing this. Alex xx
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Wow That owl jumped out at me. It was supported by the perfect words and perfect syllables for the Renga book. Great job! I did one earlier and I hope to do another soon. I enjoyed reviewing this. Alex xx
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Alex, I will.look our for your contribution. Ulla xxx
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Thank you, Ulla! xxx
Comment from Begin Again
Forgive me, Ulla, because I don't get poetry too well, but I do like the thoughts within your post. The unsuspecting change in weather leaves the Wise Owl wondering and complaining about what's happening during the night.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Forgive me, Ulla, because I don't get poetry too well, but I do like the thoughts within your post. The unsuspecting change in weather leaves the Wise Owl wondering and complaining about what's happening during the night.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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You ot it absolutely right. Thanks a lot for that. I'm no poet myself, but I do enjoy writing the short Japanese forms. Hugs, Ulla xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem about the owl with us. We have an owl who lives on a water tower in our neighborhood. We rarely see him or her, but we do off and on. I enjoyed reading this poem.
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Thank you for sharing this poem about the owl with us. We have an owl who lives on a water tower in our neighborhood. We rarely see him or her, but we do off and on. I enjoyed reading this poem.
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Barbara. I love owls and I often listen to their hoots in our surrounding mountains. Ulla xcx
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem captures such a feeling of winter's harshness with just a few words. I love how you use "deceptive winter chill" to set up the unexpected cold and how the "lonely hoots" add to the isolation. Great job!
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Your poem captures such a feeling of winter's harshness with just a few words. I love how you use "deceptive winter chill" to set up the unexpected cold and how the "lonely hoots" add to the isolation. Great job!
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Aw, thank you so much, Michael. I'm so glad you liked it. I actually like to write the short Japanese forms, but I'm no poet. Lol. Ulla :)))
