BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 81 "Bunny Artwork"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The rabbits leave behind a trail for their predators and I hope they stay safe during the winter which is a trying time for all wildlife. I love the sentiment here Yvette, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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The rabbits leave behind a trail for their predators and I hope they stay safe during the winter which is a trying time for all wildlife. I love the sentiment here Yvette, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thanx so much, Dolly -- really enjoy the RENGA when things are busy: helps re-focus into the writer's realm! :) Yvette
Comment from June Sargent
A great addition to the book of Renga. I love bunnies and they are artists at heart. Picasso would be jealous of their paws. lol Your posts are on point
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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A great addition to the book of Renga. I love bunnies and they are artists at heart. Picasso would be jealous of their paws. lol Your posts are on point
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Picasso indeed!! He'd love the disaster the back yard looks like after they and the squirrels get busy!! ;) Thanx for the review, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from kahpot
Their movements are quite rapid and enduring, (no wonder they are the world's best breeders) and as your work displays they leave their print everywhere, ****kahpot
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Their movements are quite rapid and enduring, (no wonder they are the world's best breeders) and as your work displays they leave their print everywhere, ****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thanx so much for the review on this shorty, sir -- am so glad to see you active again! Take care over there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. I have seen these foot prints many times but I have never thought of them as art pieces. But they are. They are symmetrical and repeatable.
You inspired me to write one, too.
Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Haha. I have seen these foot prints many times but I have never thought of them as art pieces. But they are. They are symmetrical and repeatable.
You inspired me to write one, too.
Well done.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thanx for stopping in on the shorty, my lady -- will be sure to check out your addition today! ;) Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
a very nice addition to this Renga collaboration
Do like especially the phrasing in your last line. Of course, the alliteration is a plus for me.
Mark
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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Yvette,
a very nice addition to this Renga collaboration
Do like especially the phrasing in your last line. Of course, the alliteration is a plus for me.
Mark
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thanx so much for the review, Mark -- always good to hear from you over here, sir! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent renga poem composition, syllables count, and connection between lines. The presentation and imagery are beautiful. Thank you for contributing to the Book and coping the rules to your author notes.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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Excellent renga poem composition, syllables count, and connection between lines. The presentation and imagery are beautiful. Thank you for contributing to the Book and coping the rules to your author notes.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
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Thanx for your review here, Gypsy... always so good to hear from you over here! :) Yvette
