Comment from eraserlynch

Excellent

Great form poetry and your presentation is excellent. I love this kind of poetry but have not tried it yet myself. Glad you are okay and look forward to reading more of your work soon.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008

Thanks for an encouraging review and kind rating. You should try it, it's fun.
Glad you liked it.
Love
Pupa

Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea

Excellent

wow i almost felt myself drowning...well-done, my sweet pupa! your form is exquisite and the word formation within, perfect. this six worthy but i've used all of mine for the week.

wow!

love,
penny

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008

Thanks Pennylein, I am sure by now you know how much I appreciate your reviews, they are always encouraging and caring.
Love
Pupa

Comment from Vladilynn

Excellent

Wow!! Pupa....Thank you...for posting this one...I realy loved it...yap all of us have this up and down!!

and I'm glad you're okay now!!


I loved the form that you've used very unique!!

Thank you for sharing

Lynn ( ^ _______ ^ )}}

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008

Thanks Lynn, so glad you liked my formed poem. Appreciate your encouraging words in this review.
Love
Pupa

Comment from justmade

Excellent

This in truth read like " ups and downs ".
I mean like the first half was like falling and the other part was like rising again. That was very cool in my opinion. I am glad you are better my friend.
Much love,
Justmade.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008

Thanks Justmade, I always appreciate your nice and encouraging reviews.
Love
Pupa

Comment from LovnPeace

Excellent

This is terrific PUPA, the words alone, but the presentation is so creative and unique. I salute you dear friend for this fine work. so happy you are doing better also. Many Blessings. L&P2U

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008

Hi dear friend,
Your kind and encouraging words are always appreciated. Glad you liked my formed poem.
Love
Pupa

Comment from davidray

Excellent

What a wondeful poem, Pupa. It might be biographical, and if it is, I'm glad you're on the upswing. I loved everything about this. Great feelings. Wonderful design. Thanks for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008

Thanks for reviewing my work, David and for the kind encouraging comments.
Glad you liked it.
Love
Pupa

Comment from Ginniegozali

Excellent

hi pupa,
a beautiful and touchy poem,
i feel like feeling your emotions when you write this one.
the feeling of sadness, heartaches, and hope as well.
beautiful!
i like it a lot.^^
thanks for sharing.^^

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008

Ginnie, thank you for your very sweet comments, they are most appreciated.
Glad you liked my poem.
Love
Pupa

Comment from babylonia

Excellent

i'm glad you are okay now. i know how it goes. i have been going on the same roller coaster. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. i love the way the words are written. nice form. keep up the good work~

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008

Thanks babylonia, I appreciate the nice comments and kind rating.
Glad you liked the form too.
Love
Pupa

reply by babylonia on 10-Jun-2008

pupa,
very telling. very nice.
you are welcome~
barbara

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

Beautifully Written.

We don't need negativity hang around.Get rid of any you may have and go forward.I loved the page layout and your words truly beautiful.

honeytree.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008

Thanks honeytree, for your encouraging words and kind rating.
Glad you liked the form too.
Love
Pupa

Comment from Gypsymooncat

Excellent

The presentation and shape of this really draws the eye. But it's what is written that keeps the attention right to the end. This flows like its shape, like an in and out movement. Almost like the journey one undertakes when in the depths of despair and slowly coming out of it. Very cleverly said and presented PUPA. xoxoxo

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2008

My dear Lady, your comments on my work is very encouraging and I thank you so much for it.
I am glad you liked the form too, it was fun doing it.
Love
Pupa