Short Stories
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37 total reviews
Comment from daniela.albu
An excellent story about how the two friends attending the seminar manage to attend Chelsea's Clinton's wedding. Gossip can be sometimes dangerous but in this case was not harmful and the story has its part of fun and humor.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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An excellent story about how the two friends attending the seminar manage to attend Chelsea's Clinton's wedding. Gossip can be sometimes dangerous but in this case was not harmful and the story has its part of fun and humor.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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daniela
Been away from the site for so long and miss you and all my friends. Thank you for enjoying my work and I hope to be back soon. I truly miss the pleasure. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Begin Again:
now I understand why my mom taught
me not to talk when I was in public
restrooms -- LOL!
this was written in a totally believable
style -- crazier things have been known
to happen
good luck in the contest
love,
jan
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Begin Again:
now I understand why my mom taught
me not to talk when I was in public
restrooms -- LOL!
this was written in a totally believable
style -- crazier things have been known
to happen
good luck in the contest
love,
jan
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Jan,
Been away from the site for so long and miss you and all my friends. Thank you for enjoying my work and I hope to be back soon. I truly miss the pleasure. Smiles, Carol
Comment from TimidView
The idea behind the story was cute. The language that the girls talked in seemed a bit stilted, though. "Knock your block off" read especially 'old.' The embarrassment at the end was priceless. Good job! I bet you do very well in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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The idea behind the story was cute. The language that the girls talked in seemed a bit stilted, though. "Knock your block off" read especially 'old.' The embarrassment at the end was priceless. Good job! I bet you do very well in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Timid,
Been away from the site for so long and miss you and all my friends. Thank you for enjoying my work and I hope to be back soon. I truly miss the pleasure. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Rama Rao
An interesting and funny story. You mixed fact and fiction to produce this story about the two women.
Sometimes the powder room/restroom conversations can be very funny.
I'm glad Hilary has been gracious to invite the two women to attend the wedding.
A few typos, I think.
Is too- is it it's true?
Amy's continue chain of bable=continuous.
First lady= former first lady?
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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An interesting and funny story. You mixed fact and fiction to produce this story about the two women.
Sometimes the powder room/restroom conversations can be very funny.
I'm glad Hilary has been gracious to invite the two women to attend the wedding.
A few typos, I think.
Is too- is it it's true?
Amy's continue chain of bable=continuous.
First lady= former first lady?
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Ramarao,
Been away from the site for so long and miss you and all my friends. Thank you for enjoying my work and I hope to be back soon. I truly miss the pleasure. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Shirley McLain
Great story and I certainly enjoyed reading it. It brought back some memories of me doing some stall talking which turned out no to be my girlfriend. This was a fun story.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Great story and I certainly enjoyed reading it. It brought back some memories of me doing some stall talking which turned out no to be my girlfriend. This was a fun story.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
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Texasgal,
Been away from the site for so long and miss you and all my friends. Thank you for enjoying my work and I hope to be back soon. I truly miss the pleasure. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sasha
This is a fun and delightful story. I enjoyed it immensely. Wouldn't it just be grand if something like this really did happen. Definitely a memory of a lifetime. Great entry for the contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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This is a fun and delightful story. I enjoyed it immensely. Wouldn't it just be grand if something like this really did happen. Definitely a memory of a lifetime. Great entry for the contest and I sincerely wish you all the best.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Sasha,
Been away from the site for so long and miss you and all my friends. Thank you for enjoying my work and I hope to be back soon. I truly miss the pleasure. Smiles, Carol
Comment from misscookie
The photo is perfect for your story they fit the charcthers perfectly. I truly enjotyed reading this sweet interesting story.
there was never a dull moment.
this is a good write,
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The photo is perfect for your story they fit the charcthers perfectly. I truly enjotyed reading this sweet interesting story.
there was never a dull moment.
this is a good write,
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Cookie,
Been away from the site for so long and miss you and all my friends. Thank you for enjoying my work and I hope to be back soon. I truly miss the pleasure. Smiles, Carol
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Tell me something if your resting How come your on the machince so much. Don't answer me
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Today is parent day..I leave shortly to take them to store, beauty salon, doctor, etc. Otherwise I would be at the house renovating. Our move is planned for Sept 20th so I have lots to do still. Take care..Carol
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Boy you had a few big busy weeks ahead of you. Now you becareful and don't hurt or over do it.You shoulsdn'tbe doing anything , but I know that will not happen.
Comment from fictionwriter
I loved this. Seems like something that would happen to my daughters, they have the same kind of attitudes as these girls. great job.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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I loved this. Seems like something that would happen to my daughters, they have the same kind of attitudes as these girls. great job.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
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Joy,
Been away from the site for so long and miss you and all my friends. Thank you for enjoying my work and I hope to be back soon. I truly miss the pleasure. Smiles, Carol
Comment from AnnaLinda
BeginAgain,
Your once of a lifetime meeting entry had me smiling the whole way through! I enjoyed reading it and I liked the
energy of it and found it to be a very creative approach to the contest.
I especially liked this part:
"Put on my red cocktail dress and just sashayed my little tush off the elevator like I owned the place."
You may need the word 'it' after 'doing' in the following sentence:
"All the movies have them doing everywhere and liking it too."
and 'her' instead of 'here' in this sentence:
"Hearing the stall door next to here close"
You did a fantastic job on this and thank you so much
for selecting that photo of mine. I think that it is
a great match for your fun story.
Linda
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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BeginAgain,
Your once of a lifetime meeting entry had me smiling the whole way through! I enjoyed reading it and I liked the
energy of it and found it to be a very creative approach to the contest.
I especially liked this part:
"Put on my red cocktail dress and just sashayed my little tush off the elevator like I owned the place."
You may need the word 'it' after 'doing' in the following sentence:
"All the movies have them doing everywhere and liking it too."
and 'her' instead of 'here' in this sentence:
"Hearing the stall door next to here close"
You did a fantastic job on this and thank you so much
for selecting that photo of mine. I think that it is
a great match for your fun story.
Linda
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Linda,
Been away from the site for so long and miss you and all my friends. Thank you for enjoying my work and I hope to be back soon. I truly miss the pleasure. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Belinda
It was indeed a meeting of a lifetime! You create the intricate situation to make all this possible to happen. And you show the Minister's great capacity of diplomacy! Hilarious gossip of Hillary and Bill, Carol...
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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It was indeed a meeting of a lifetime! You create the intricate situation to make all this possible to happen. And you show the Minister's great capacity of diplomacy! Hilarious gossip of Hillary and Bill, Carol...
Comment Written 22-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Belinda,
Been away from the site for so long and miss you and all my friends. Thank you for enjoying my work and I hope to be back soon. I truly miss the pleasure. Smiles, Carol
