Rose Bud
Poem on feeling emotions18 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
The rosebud has many meanings here and you make the rosebud come alive. I like the free verse structure and starting each verse with Rosebud.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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The rosebud has many meanings here and you make the rosebud come alive. I like the free verse structure and starting each verse with Rosebud.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Thank you kindly for the review.Debbie
Comment from JSway
I like the gentle coaxing in this work, as you urge the rosebud. At first there is understanding about self-protection and the desire to remain closed within the self. But then, because you know the beauty inside, you kindly cajole the rosebud to unfold, and share itself with the world. Lovely!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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I like the gentle coaxing in this work, as you urge the rosebud. At first there is understanding about self-protection and the desire to remain closed within the self. But then, because you know the beauty inside, you kindly cajole the rosebud to unfold, and share itself with the world. Lovely!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Thank you so much for the lovely review. Debbie
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You're welcome, Debbie:)
Comment from Mustang Patty
There are some people like this, . .or worse, those that open up so eagerly only to be plucked too early and left to die. (I digress - sorry, the poem just got me thinking.) This is a beautiful poem with a great deal of passion and feeling.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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There are some people like this, . .or worse, those that open up so eagerly only to be plucked too early and left to die. (I digress - sorry, the poem just got me thinking.) This is a beautiful poem with a great deal of passion and feeling.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your very kind review. Debbie
Comment from richard7
How you use rose bud is very person applicable in corelation with the feelings topic.
It's really nice to read and i like the gentle feel of the flow and soft wording , rose bud throughout is quite cpturing and calming.
Really nice in rose red.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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How you use rose bud is very person applicable in corelation with the feelings topic.
It's really nice to read and i like the gentle feel of the flow and soft wording , rose bud throughout is quite cpturing and calming.
Really nice in rose red.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Thank you kindly. Have a great day! Debbie
Comment from Irene D. Garces
...Good morning Pretty Rosebud;
I pray you tell me true;
To be as sweet as a red, red, rose;
What must a buddy do...
There goes one of those Nursery rhymes that I liked...
So many poems were made with the rose or rosebud as the subject. A poet can't really help the attraction of a rose to be the subject. Besides, the rose alone signifies beauty (the flower itself) and pain (the thorns)combined. And what a topic to behold.
A rose bud could be comparable to someone who's young and no experience yet in this world. To ask one to open up is like encouraging her to go deeper into life and find it's meaningful ways...
I loved this piece and the very beautiful picture of a red rose bud...
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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...Good morning Pretty Rosebud;
I pray you tell me true;
To be as sweet as a red, red, rose;
What must a buddy do...
There goes one of those Nursery rhymes that I liked...
So many poems were made with the rose or rosebud as the subject. A poet can't really help the attraction of a rose to be the subject. Besides, the rose alone signifies beauty (the flower itself) and pain (the thorns)combined. And what a topic to behold.
A rose bud could be comparable to someone who's young and no experience yet in this world. To ask one to open up is like encouraging her to go deeper into life and find it's meaningful ways...
I loved this piece and the very beautiful picture of a red rose bud...
Comment Written 22-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Thank you kindly for the review and the 6 star rating.
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I'm so glad you like my review...
Cheers!
In Christ,
irene
Comment from ImJLAD
Interesting way of portraying someone who is keeping their emotions to themselves in order to keep safe.
Then their lover urging them to open up and let them in.
Nicely done and great imagery - love the repetition here. Not typically an impact phrase "Rose Bud" but it really keeps the theme and power of the entire poem.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Interesting way of portraying someone who is keeping their emotions to themselves in order to keep safe.
Then their lover urging them to open up and let them in.
Nicely done and great imagery - love the repetition here. Not typically an impact phrase "Rose Bud" but it really keeps the theme and power of the entire poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Thank you kindly for the review. Debbie
Comment from Ghosterb
This was a very beautiful poem my friend!
I think it portrays the way that you try to gain the trust of someone you love. I think the rose is very good way to show this process.
Very nicely done my friend!
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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This was a very beautiful poem my friend!
I think it portrays the way that you try to gain the trust of someone you love. I think the rose is very good way to show this process.
Very nicely done my friend!
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Thank you kindly for the lovely review! Debbie
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a beautiful illustration of opening your heart to love, vulnerable and closed at first, but slowly opening to receive love and blooms to its full potential.....
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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this is a beautiful illustration of opening your heart to love, vulnerable and closed at first, but slowly opening to receive love and blooms to its full potential.....
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your most kind review. Debbie