Midnight Murderers
To those who have stolen my life.31 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Instead of discussing your poem, I would like to know how your move went and if you feeling any better. You know I don't do gore very well.
Instead of discussing your poem, I would like to know how your move went and if you feeling any better. You know I don't do gore very well.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2011
Comment from MS Writer
Wow what a powerful poem. I love the "gnashing curs". Excellent rhyme and great quick pace. I really enjoyed this "Dark Side" poetry. Great job.
Wow what a powerful poem. I love the "gnashing curs". Excellent rhyme and great quick pace. I really enjoyed this "Dark Side" poetry. Great job.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2011
Comment from sugardog
Wow...so dark and scary!! And I understand what you are feeling. You have expressed your nightmares well here. Smart word choices-"curs" and "cretins"-wow...you really packed a punch with this one, Suse!!!! The repeated line is very effective. Nice work and i hope you are okay, my dear friend. Dana
Wow...so dark and scary!! And I understand what you are feeling. You have expressed your nightmares well here. Smart word choices-"curs" and "cretins"-wow...you really packed a punch with this one, Suse!!!! The repeated line is very effective. Nice work and i hope you are okay, my dear friend. Dana
Comment Written 18-Apr-2011
Comment from missy98writer
Susan,
your dark poem is wonderfully written with very dark imagery. Your art work is perfect. . Your poem has solid rhyming. You've effectively used the poetic devices alliteration and metaphor. Your third stanza was my favorite; "With horrid, hateful hurt they stir These cretin's coming from Madness, mayhem, gnashing curs Of evils darkened slum..." An excellent dark poem, my friend.
Melissa.
Susan,
your dark poem is wonderfully written with very dark imagery. Your art work is perfect. . Your poem has solid rhyming. You've effectively used the poetic devices alliteration and metaphor. Your third stanza was my favorite; "With horrid, hateful hurt they stir These cretin's coming from Madness, mayhem, gnashing curs Of evils darkened slum..." An excellent dark poem, my friend.
Melissa.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2011
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A good write with good imagery and flows. Hi Susan picture is a bit gory. I hope it does not match your mood LOL. Any WAY A GOOD WRITE YOUR SCRIPT IS WELL WRITTEN THANKS FOR SHARING. Take care my friend.
A good write with good imagery and flows. Hi Susan picture is a bit gory. I hope it does not match your mood LOL. Any WAY A GOOD WRITE YOUR SCRIPT IS WELL WRITTEN THANKS FOR SHARING. Take care my friend.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2011
Comment from Carrie Smith
Really dark, Suse and I know exactly where you are coming from! Great imagery, great rhyme, great alliteration. Your use of curs - perfect! xoxoSusan
Really dark, Suse and I know exactly where you are coming from! Great imagery, great rhyme, great alliteration. Your use of curs - perfect! xoxoSusan
Comment Written 18-Apr-2011
Comment from Patrick Jordan
Those demons from the past are hard to shake. Your write really reflects the horrors of abusers. Dark as a slum. Thank God the we have the ability to change and move on. But it takes years. This is a fine poem!
Those demons from the past are hard to shake. Your write really reflects the horrors of abusers. Dark as a slum. Thank God the we have the ability to change and move on. But it takes years. This is a fine poem!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2011
Comment from c_lucas
I guess you have genre jumped. This caught me by surprise. It is very well written with very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
I guess you have genre jumped. This caught me by surprise. It is very well written with very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2011
Comment from Espresso momma
This is very well metered and rhymed stanzas. An imaginative person unlike myself can only do poetry like this. Thanks for sharing.
This is very well metered and rhymed stanzas. An imaginative person unlike myself can only do poetry like this. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2011
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Oh, my goodness, Susan..
where did this come from!!
What a grissly, scary read.
And here's me feeling so annoyed over a cracked car-screen. We were driving out through the villages today and two young boys of about ten threw stones at passing cars... one cracked our windscreen... only about 5 inches long, but since it is an actual crack, it means a new screen which costs well over £500 from insurance, and the excess of £75 which we have to pay. We caught the boys, and one started crying... (in a play-ground) and Colin spoke to his Mum, who gave us a name and phone-number for us to let her know the cost, but who knows if it is genuine!! So sickening.. plus it could have caused an accident. KIds!!
Margaret
Oh, my goodness, Susan..
where did this come from!!
What a grissly, scary read.
And here's me feeling so annoyed over a cracked car-screen. We were driving out through the villages today and two young boys of about ten threw stones at passing cars... one cracked our windscreen... only about 5 inches long, but since it is an actual crack, it means a new screen which costs well over £500 from insurance, and the excess of £75 which we have to pay. We caught the boys, and one started crying... (in a play-ground) and Colin spoke to his Mum, who gave us a name and phone-number for us to let her know the cost, but who knows if it is genuine!! So sickening.. plus it could have caused an accident. KIds!!
Margaret
Comment Written 18-Apr-2011