Finger Nails
Gotta get clean, get all the mean...beneath54 total reviews
Comment from Magic Wand
Creepy! Gory, and awful. And I couldn't seem to read it fast enough. Dark and humorous. You captured a freaky pschopath's nature very well. Please tell me this was not biographical. (Just kidding...I don't really want to know.)
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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Creepy! Gory, and awful. And I couldn't seem to read it fast enough. Dark and humorous. You captured a freaky pschopath's nature very well. Please tell me this was not biographical. (Just kidding...I don't really want to know.)
Comment Written 24-May-2011
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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Thanks. And yes it is biographical. I am currently typing with my nose LOL, not really. Thanks again.
Comment from marcii
It is quite a scary read in its way. I enjoyed the feel of learning how mad he was. Sounds bad enjoying this but to like something yet feel a little sick thinking about someone doing this to themselves.
Marcii
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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It is quite a scary read in its way. I enjoyed the feel of learning how mad he was. Sounds bad enjoying this but to like something yet feel a little sick thinking about someone doing this to themselves.
Marcii
Comment Written 24-May-2011
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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indeed. thanks for reading.
Comment from The Stranger
it is a dark story that in itself looks at the world of compulsive behavoir, a man who has an obsession with finger nails, whilst being driven over the edge by the dog next door and the suspicions over his girlfriend
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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it is a dark story that in itself looks at the world of compulsive behavoir, a man who has an obsession with finger nails, whilst being driven over the edge by the dog next door and the suspicions over his girlfriend
Comment Written 23-May-2011
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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Thanks.
Comment from Tina55
Wow! I was hooked from the first paragraph. Excellent suspense, use of language, just the right amount of profanity and violence...love it!
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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Wow! I was hooked from the first paragraph. Excellent suspense, use of language, just the right amount of profanity and violence...love it!
Comment Written 23-May-2011
reply by the author on 24-May-2011
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Thank you kindly
Comment from lola29
Ooh, this is truly a horror story, and I think you may have just won the contest. You build tension brilliantly, and I like the way formatted your story.
reply by the author on 23-May-2011
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Ooh, this is truly a horror story, and I think you may have just won the contest. You build tension brilliantly, and I like the way formatted your story.
Comment Written 23-May-2011
reply by the author on 23-May-2011
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'finger crossed' Thanks for looking.
Comment from Cheryl Daphine
Wow truly a sick story,very well done.He quit taking his pills,must have taken some powerful ones,to keep all that leashed up.Very well written horror story.
reply by the author on 23-May-2011
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Wow truly a sick story,very well done.He quit taking his pills,must have taken some powerful ones,to keep all that leashed up.Very well written horror story.
Comment Written 23-May-2011
reply by the author on 23-May-2011
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thank you kindly.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Scary and horrible and tantalising and just a little terrifyingly possible.
The alternating narrative and diary entries works well to create the tension towards the inevitable climax.
reply by the author on 23-May-2011
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Scary and horrible and tantalising and just a little terrifyingly possible.
The alternating narrative and diary entries works well to create the tension towards the inevitable climax.
Comment Written 23-May-2011
reply by the author on 23-May-2011
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Thank you kindly.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
What a clever story line who would have thought of writing about finger nails. A good story with imagery and needs no change to it . Mary
reply by the author on 23-May-2011
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What a clever story line who would have thought of writing about finger nails. A good story with imagery and needs no change to it . Mary
Comment Written 23-May-2011
reply by the author on 23-May-2011
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Thanks.
Comment from /*Twinkle
Well, to be honest I didn't really understand it but my stomache churned with fear reading every line. Yet I still had to read the entire piece which means you did a good job. Great entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 23-May-2011
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Well, to be honest I didn't really understand it but my stomache churned with fear reading every line. Yet I still had to read the entire piece which means you did a good job. Great entry for the contest.
Comment Written 22-May-2011
reply by the author on 23-May-2011
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Thanks for reading.
Comment from Writingfundimension
This is an excellent entry for the horror contest. The story was told in a creative manner with the flashbacks and the doses of sanity around the parents contrasting with the insanity brought on by the wife. Great job! Good luck in the contest. Bev
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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This is an excellent entry for the horror contest. The story was told in a creative manner with the flashbacks and the doses of sanity around the parents contrasting with the insanity brought on by the wife. Great job! Good luck in the contest. Bev
Comment Written 22-May-2011
reply by the author on 22-May-2011
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thanks
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Welcome!