Our marriage
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Meeting and dating"Short book about how our marriage started.
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Comment from Linda England Bonam
I so enjoyed reading about you and Robert getting together. So there really is such a thing as love at first sight. I didn't ever know anyone that had it happen to them, so I thought it was just a saying! Now I know it really happened, and I remember from reading your profile that you have been with him for 30 years....so it REALLY worked out! Great story, and thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2011
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I so enjoyed reading about you and Robert getting together. So there really is such a thing as love at first sight. I didn't ever know anyone that had it happen to them, so I thought it was just a saying! Now I know it really happened, and I remember from reading your profile that you have been with him for 30 years....so it REALLY worked out! Great story, and thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your thoughtful kind review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from Charlene0513
To robina1978,
Your venturesome excursions with Robert before marriage certainly gave you both time to ignite the flame that is still burning after 33 years.
Errors :
1)(We had)[Q]quite a few drinks later and a couple of dances,(and then) the music stopped.So we [had to] head(ed) for our room.
2)[I did really mean a cup of coffee.]-not really necessary to repeat, anyone would get the meaning of it
3).....a [D]doctor and now training to become a [C]consultant [P]psychiatrist. He was a [R]registered [A]accountant....
--capitalization not needed
4)My thoughts were that was great that he did something ...
(fragmented)
I thought that it was great he did something.........
5)(At the time we met,)Robert was on a golfing holiday with his best friend.
6)The following days the three of us went sightseeing, [as far as there was anything to go and see.](not necessary unless you list some things you enjoyed sightseeing
7)The car was only insured [on](in) my name.
8)[On one of the first trip](On our first trip,) we drove to the top of a mountain, but went wrong and had to turn(around).
9) With me behind the wheel, he used the break pedal and I (put my foot on)the gas and the clutch.
10)We never got the hand break fixed, but tried to avoid situations like [this.](that)- distinguish your past from the present
11)(I)[C]can't understand [now] anymore why we did not mind to have Brian there much of the time.-noun needed
12)Robert and Brian never played golf on [this](that) holiday [then]-omit. I know for sure Robert did not mind, Brian [might](may) have[.],(though) we never asked him. [though.]-omit
13)We made trips daily[.](,) I drove and Robert [was] read[ing] the map[.]that sometimes) [This] could end up in real heavy discussions.-learn to combine small sentences
Charlene
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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To robina1978,
Your venturesome excursions with Robert before marriage certainly gave you both time to ignite the flame that is still burning after 33 years.
Errors :
1)(We had)[Q]quite a few drinks later and a couple of dances,(and then) the music stopped.So we [had to] head(ed) for our room.
2)[I did really mean a cup of coffee.]-not really necessary to repeat, anyone would get the meaning of it
3).....a [D]doctor and now training to become a [C]consultant [P]psychiatrist. He was a [R]registered [A]accountant....
--capitalization not needed
4)My thoughts were that was great that he did something ...
(fragmented)
I thought that it was great he did something.........
5)(At the time we met,)Robert was on a golfing holiday with his best friend.
6)The following days the three of us went sightseeing, [as far as there was anything to go and see.](not necessary unless you list some things you enjoyed sightseeing
7)The car was only insured [on](in) my name.
8)[On one of the first trip](On our first trip,) we drove to the top of a mountain, but went wrong and had to turn(around).
9) With me behind the wheel, he used the break pedal and I (put my foot on)the gas and the clutch.
10)We never got the hand break fixed, but tried to avoid situations like [this.](that)- distinguish your past from the present
11)(I)[C]can't understand [now] anymore why we did not mind to have Brian there much of the time.-noun needed
12)Robert and Brian never played golf on [this](that) holiday [then]-omit. I know for sure Robert did not mind, Brian [might](may) have[.],(though) we never asked him. [though.]-omit
13)We made trips daily[.](,) I drove and Robert [was] read[ing] the map[.]that sometimes) [This] could end up in real heavy discussions.-learn to combine small sentences
Charlene
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your thoughtful kind review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from Dutchie
Hi Ine that's quite a story!1 It was so nice to read.
It proofs again: don't search for love, it has to come on your path. This was meant to be.Love at first sight.
I loved this story and it was really a pleasure to read.
Liefs Fia
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Hi Ine that's quite a story!1 It was so nice to read.
It proofs again: don't search for love, it has to come on your path. This was meant to be.Love at first sight.
I loved this story and it was really a pleasure to read.
Liefs Fia
Comment Written 18-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your thoughtful kind review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from Hareem.S
Hey, nice story about how you met your husband. Cool, a fortunate teller had already predicted you would meet him? Love at first sight is rare and unimaginable these days, it's great you guys worked it out and are together. A nice write.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Hey, nice story about how you met your husband. Cool, a fortunate teller had already predicted you would meet him? Love at first sight is rare and unimaginable these days, it's great you guys worked it out and are together. A nice write.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your thoughtful kind review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from misscookie
I can't see anyone giving you a low rating love is love and it's a blessing your true love that wonderful hoilday.
I enjoyed the story very much.
TYhank you for sharingSorry I have no more six stars.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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I can't see anyone giving you a low rating love is love and it's a blessing your true love that wonderful hoilday.
I enjoyed the story very much.
TYhank you for sharingSorry I have no more six stars.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your thoughtful kind review. Blessings and take care, Ine. Don't worry my dear, just that you liked it is enough for me.
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Your very welcome.
Comment from TammyGail
I enjoyed your note first of all.. I won't even get started on it but nice .. Your chapter was very well written- I enjoyed the read.. Great imagery used as well can't wait for the next one .. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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I enjoyed your note first of all.. I won't even get started on it but nice .. Your chapter was very well written- I enjoyed the read.. Great imagery used as well can't wait for the next one .. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 18-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Thanks for your thoughtful kind review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
awww, such lovely memories you have
of you and Robert's beginnings.
hmmm, would like to know what poor
Brian made of it all! lol.
very nicely written and presented,
Dutchess Ine. warmly, xx, eph.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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awww, such lovely memories you have
of you and Robert's beginnings.
hmmm, would like to know what poor
Brian made of it all! lol.
very nicely written and presented,
Dutchess Ine. warmly, xx, eph.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Thanks so much for your thoughtful and kind review. Blessings and love, Ine. For an update on hubby and his health see my profile page please
Comment from Chris Tee
Another absolutely interesting chapter about your romance starting and eminent relationship with Robert.
Well done with a splendid write here Ine old girl
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Another absolutely interesting chapter about your romance starting and eminent relationship with Robert.
Well done with a splendid write here Ine old girl
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Thanks so much for your thoughtful and kind review. Blessings and love, Ine. For an update on hubby and his health see my profile page please. Any news yet?
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Yes she got a phone call and they are now seeking another experts advice on Monday
Will let us know on Tuesday.
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Gosh, it must be so complicated. Must be murder on both of you. Would it possibly be better for her to go to the States as they are usually the best in the world? Just trying to think. You could try and google or just plainly ask the specialists.