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Poems By AnnieDawn

Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "What Is My Love?"
My book of poems and stories

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Comment from Black_Oxygen
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Well Done ~ Annie

This is beautiful Love Poetry. The emotions are powerful
and the passion is intense. It flows smoothly and paints
vivid images. The attached photo is the perfect accent.
Thank You for your creation.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
    Thank you for your review. I thank you for taking the time to really read my poem and I thank you for your positive comments.
Comment from Terra Dane
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Concise. "He is song without words creating joy" - nice line. He resembles element--raging storm--thunder--that can be a little scary and conflicts with other things unless we know that storm is about protecting you or giving you strength--just some stuff my mind clicked upon.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
    Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Sagnik Das
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Discernible & to a degree 'whimsical' - I like the 'Platonic' theme & structure of this immensely endearing treatise, fraught in eulogizing metaphors & epithets ascribed to the beloved. The way you aggrandize the ardor of amorous passion despite brevity, fares unbridled appraisal ; adds much to the intrinsic grace & vitality of the piece.


Presented in a sequence of free-styled cadences, your poem reflects vividly on those attributes of 'Metaphysical love' (just my interpretation), that tend to transcend themselves from earthly mundaneness to eternal sublimity. The descriptive eloquence you employ (especially the consonance of the 'S' sounds [3rd para]) is remarkable, & conjured a beaming sense of radiance, even on my otherwise demure countenance.


Hence, to infer precisely, this work possesses a vibrant fervor to appeal directly to the heart, & fares considerably well to stand out on its own. Well done, Ms. Dawn - Hats off to your creativity. Accept my most affable wishes for the impending contest. Thank you.





 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
    Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate the complimentary comments.
reply by Sagnik Das on 20-Sep-2013
    My foremost pleasure. Nothing save your bounty beseems my incentive.
Comment from gaangel62
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Beautiful poem....sounds like you have a great idea of what love should be and want to embrace it....thanks for sharing....really enjoyed the read...hugs....Angie

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
    Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from justmarly
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Oh yes and we can say so much more about our lovers. If you have a man who treats you well then you have a good man. I had 3 abusive men. One I loved the earth that held him up. Very good poem. Thyanks for sharing. JM

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
    Thank you so much for your kind review.
reply by justmarly on 20-Sep-2013
    You are very welcome. JM
Comment from mystery poet
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You define the love moments spent between
lovers when all is right and all remnants
of scars vanish with a mere touch or glance.
Incredible the power we gain when someone
loves us and even better when mutual.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
    Thank you so much for your kind review.
reply by mystery poet on 20-Sep-2013
    It's a pleasure! LOL::}} Joyce
Comment from l.raven
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This is a beautiful touching poem..It's every little thing that you like about this person that when put together becomes a great love. So very well written. Luff Lindaxxoo

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
    Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Irish Rain
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awww! this is so sweet! especially like...he smoothes away the marks of other travelers...good luck to you in this contest, and blessings tonight!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
    Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from allborn66
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This is a wonderful poem. You expressed your theme very well. You inspired great mental images. The tone is appropriate to the theme.
Barbara

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
    Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Starlit Ink
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You describe a free spirit who brings big smiles that were long waited for. There is much appreciation for all that he is described in this touching poem. I enjoyed the soft and strong elements conveying a man who is a "rock of whispers" to lean on. It's a deep and moving poem so best of luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
    Thank you so much for your kind review. I wish you luck with your entries also.