Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "What Is My Love?"My book of poems and stories
58 total reviews
Comment from Black_Oxygen
Well Done ~ Annie
This is beautiful Love Poetry. The emotions are powerful
and the passion is intense. It flows smoothly and paints
vivid images. The attached photo is the perfect accent.
Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
Well Done ~ Annie
This is beautiful Love Poetry. The emotions are powerful
and the passion is intense. It flows smoothly and paints
vivid images. The attached photo is the perfect accent.
Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your review. I thank you for taking the time to really read my poem and I thank you for your positive comments.
Comment from Terra Dane
Concise. "He is song without words creating joy" - nice line. He resembles element--raging storm--thunder--that can be a little scary and conflicts with other things unless we know that storm is about protecting you or giving you strength--just some stuff my mind clicked upon.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
Concise. "He is song without words creating joy" - nice line. He resembles element--raging storm--thunder--that can be a little scary and conflicts with other things unless we know that storm is about protecting you or giving you strength--just some stuff my mind clicked upon.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Sagnik Das
Discernible & to a degree 'whimsical' - I like the 'Platonic' theme & structure of this immensely endearing treatise, fraught in eulogizing metaphors & epithets ascribed to the beloved. The way you aggrandize the ardor of amorous passion despite brevity, fares unbridled appraisal ; adds much to the intrinsic grace & vitality of the piece.
Presented in a sequence of free-styled cadences, your poem reflects vividly on those attributes of 'Metaphysical love' (just my interpretation), that tend to transcend themselves from earthly mundaneness to eternal sublimity. The descriptive eloquence you employ (especially the consonance of the 'S' sounds [3rd para]) is remarkable, & conjured a beaming sense of radiance, even on my otherwise demure countenance.
Hence, to infer precisely, this work possesses a vibrant fervor to appeal directly to the heart, & fares considerably well to stand out on its own. Well done, Ms. Dawn - Hats off to your creativity. Accept my most affable wishes for the impending contest. Thank you.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
Discernible & to a degree 'whimsical' - I like the 'Platonic' theme & structure of this immensely endearing treatise, fraught in eulogizing metaphors & epithets ascribed to the beloved. The way you aggrandize the ardor of amorous passion despite brevity, fares unbridled appraisal ; adds much to the intrinsic grace & vitality of the piece.
Presented in a sequence of free-styled cadences, your poem reflects vividly on those attributes of 'Metaphysical love' (just my interpretation), that tend to transcend themselves from earthly mundaneness to eternal sublimity. The descriptive eloquence you employ (especially the consonance of the 'S' sounds [3rd para]) is remarkable, & conjured a beaming sense of radiance, even on my otherwise demure countenance.
Hence, to infer precisely, this work possesses a vibrant fervor to appeal directly to the heart, & fares considerably well to stand out on its own. Well done, Ms. Dawn - Hats off to your creativity. Accept my most affable wishes for the impending contest. Thank you.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate the complimentary comments.
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My foremost pleasure. Nothing save your bounty beseems my incentive.
Comment from gaangel62
Beautiful poem....sounds like you have a great idea of what love should be and want to embrace it....thanks for sharing....really enjoyed the read...hugs....Angie
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
Beautiful poem....sounds like you have a great idea of what love should be and want to embrace it....thanks for sharing....really enjoyed the read...hugs....Angie
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from justmarly
Oh yes and we can say so much more about our lovers. If you have a man who treats you well then you have a good man. I had 3 abusive men. One I loved the earth that held him up. Very good poem. Thyanks for sharing. JM
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
Oh yes and we can say so much more about our lovers. If you have a man who treats you well then you have a good man. I had 3 abusive men. One I loved the earth that held him up. Very good poem. Thyanks for sharing. JM
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
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You are very welcome. JM
Comment from mystery poet
You define the love moments spent between
lovers when all is right and all remnants
of scars vanish with a mere touch or glance.
Incredible the power we gain when someone
loves us and even better when mutual.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
You define the love moments spent between
lovers when all is right and all remnants
of scars vanish with a mere touch or glance.
Incredible the power we gain when someone
loves us and even better when mutual.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
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It's a pleasure! LOL::}} Joyce
Comment from l.raven
This is a beautiful touching poem..It's every little thing that you like about this person that when put together becomes a great love. So very well written. Luff Lindaxxoo
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
This is a beautiful touching poem..It's every little thing that you like about this person that when put together becomes a great love. So very well written. Luff Lindaxxoo
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Irish Rain
awww! this is so sweet! especially like...he smoothes away the marks of other travelers...good luck to you in this contest, and blessings tonight!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
awww! this is so sweet! especially like...he smoothes away the marks of other travelers...good luck to you in this contest, and blessings tonight!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from allborn66
This is a wonderful poem. You expressed your theme very well. You inspired great mental images. The tone is appropriate to the theme.
Barbara
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
This is a wonderful poem. You expressed your theme very well. You inspired great mental images. The tone is appropriate to the theme.
Barbara
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Starlit Ink
You describe a free spirit who brings big smiles that were long waited for. There is much appreciation for all that he is described in this touching poem. I enjoyed the soft and strong elements conveying a man who is a "rock of whispers" to lean on. It's a deep and moving poem so best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
You describe a free spirit who brings big smiles that were long waited for. There is much appreciation for all that he is described in this touching poem. I enjoyed the soft and strong elements conveying a man who is a "rock of whispers" to lean on. It's a deep and moving poem so best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I wish you luck with your entries also.