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Comment from Janice Canerdy
Oh, yes, there are powers beyond brute strength. Sometimes strategic thinking and agility are better--as shown in this entertaining poem.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Oh, yes, there are powers beyond brute strength. Sometimes strategic thinking and agility are better--as shown in this entertaining poem.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the lovely review and wishes:)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
yes this is well written and we loved the humour you enclosed made us both smile you used this form well we enjoyed regards Jill and Erick
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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yes this is well written and we loved the humour you enclosed made us both smile you used this form well we enjoyed regards Jill and Erick
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the lovely review and wishes:)
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hah! Where on earth did you come up with that hilarious photo, Anupam? That,coupled with your cleverly written words, really make for one gut-busting read, hah hah!
Oh, I'm saving this one in my bookcase. I have to show this one to my wife and kids, and all of their friends, and my cousins, aunts and uncles, and...well, you get the idea, LOL...
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Hah! Where on earth did you come up with that hilarious photo, Anupam? That,coupled with your cleverly written words, really make for one gut-busting read, hah hah!
Oh, I'm saving this one in my bookcase. I have to show this one to my wife and kids, and all of their friends, and my cousins, aunts and uncles, and...well, you get the idea, LOL...
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Hi,
I am delighted you liked it so much. How sweet of you to have said such lovely things, I hope they enjoy it too. Thank you for the lovely review:)
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You are more than welcome, my friend. They're gonna love it!
Comment from judiverse
Hi, Anupam. this was worth a laugh, and best of luck in the contest. I love the idea of the Ninja cat. Sometimes it's the unexpected that works to one's advantage. Apparently the poor dog didn't see it coming. Sometimes the size of the dog doesn't make any difference. It can still be a sissy. This is clever with correct syllable count and great conclusion. This was definitely the underdog. judi
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Hi, Anupam. this was worth a laugh, and best of luck in the contest. I love the idea of the Ninja cat. Sometimes it's the unexpected that works to one's advantage. Apparently the poor dog didn't see it coming. Sometimes the size of the dog doesn't make any difference. It can still be a sissy. This is clever with correct syllable count and great conclusion. This was definitely the underdog. judi
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Hi,
haha...really size doesn't matter sometimes. I am pleased you liked it. Thank you for the lovely wishes and review:)
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HI, anupam. You're so welcome. Cleverly done! judi
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha Anupam,
Oh those claws can send the largest dog running. Your words explain it well. Have a great day.
Aloha, Ginger
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Aloha Anupam,
Oh those claws can send the largest dog running. Your words explain it well. Have a great day.
Aloha, Ginger
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the lovely review:)
Comment from tbacha58
cunning Ninja cat
smashes dog's innocent face
He goes home crying
A portrait so very well described for an entry to a contest.
A very original poem written of course very well. Good luck. Terry
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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cunning Ninja cat
smashes dog's innocent face
He goes home crying
A portrait so very well described for an entry to a contest.
A very original poem written of course very well. Good luck. Terry
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the lovely review:)
Comment from MoonWillow
I saw this photo quite a while back and was going to use it in another prompt, but couldn't think of anything clever for it. The Ninja thing didn't even dawn on me...great idea, Anupam!! It does look like he's giving the dog a good kick and winning. LOL! Love it, and good luck in the contest. :)shawn
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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I saw this photo quite a while back and was going to use it in another prompt, but couldn't think of anything clever for it. The Ninja thing didn't even dawn on me...great idea, Anupam!! It does look like he's giving the dog a good kick and winning. LOL! Love it, and good luck in the contest. :)shawn
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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I am glad you enjoyed this. I was looking for a funny pic for the words and found it. Thank you for the lovely review:)
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
I love it.
First you've found just the right words in
a well written 5-7-5 poem.
Then you produced a stunning picture to perfectly complement those words and...
Finally a knock-out overall presentation.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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I love it.
First you've found just the right words in
a well written 5-7-5 poem.
Then you produced a stunning picture to perfectly complement those words and...
Finally a knock-out overall presentation.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Wow!!
I wasn't expecting this. Thanks a lot for the glowing stars and a lovely review:)
Comment from barkingdog
Your use of alliteration(-cunning... cat; he... home) and consonance(-dog's innocent face) enhances this short poem.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Your use of alliteration(-cunning... cat; he... home) and consonance(-dog's innocent face) enhances this short poem.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the lovely review:)
Comment from kiwisteveh
Yes, cats are usually too quick and too cunning for dogs - especially dogs that have been trained not to attack them! Our poor old golden retriever won't even walk past the cats because she knows she may get a swipe on the nose....
Steve
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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Yes, cats are usually too quick and too cunning for dogs - especially dogs that have been trained not to attack them! Our poor old golden retriever won't even walk past the cats because she knows she may get a swipe on the nose....
Steve
Comment Written 28-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2013
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I am pleased you liked it. Thank you for the lovely review:)