New Blessings
The only way it will work20 total reviews
Comment from Cycler
Very nice description of taking the leap into a relationship - with God or even with a person. This is quite versatile. Nice ...
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Very nice description of taking the leap into a relationship - with God or even with a person. This is quite versatile. Nice ...
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your words allows the reader to see and feel the image portrayed in these few words
as new blessings found her and as she let go of fear love entered flows well
cheers Smoothiecool
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good luck in the contest
your words allows the reader to see and feel the image portrayed in these few words
as new blessings found her and as she let go of fear love entered flows well
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
I can understand that happening. And you have focused on a very important aspect of prayer with your 575 poem. I enjoyed reading it,
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I can understand that happening. And you have focused on a very important aspect of prayer with your 575 poem. I enjoyed reading it,
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
Comment from in777wr#
This was a well written poem. I loved the message that this poem conveyed. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. Your poem reads, and flows well.
new blessings
when she asked LOVE to enter
and asked fear to leave
Nicely written.
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This was a well written poem. I loved the message that this poem conveyed. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order. Your poem reads, and flows well.
new blessings
when she asked LOVE to enter
and asked fear to leave
Nicely written.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
Comment from w.j.debi
Love does open the door to so many wonderful things, especially when we let go of fear. Well stated in so few words. Perfect syllable count for the prompt.good luck in the contest.
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Love does open the door to so many wonderful things, especially when we let go of fear. Well stated in so few words. Perfect syllable count for the prompt.good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
Comment from James Chaima Phiri
You have used the right picture for this poem. A prayer is the only way we can use to ask for blessings. It is true that love and fear cannot stay in one place. One has to depart. It is comforting to note that in this poem, she asked love to enter and asked fear to leave. The benefits are also mentioned in the poem; 'she found new blessings'. I wish you the best in this contest.
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You have used the right picture for this poem. A prayer is the only way we can use to ask for blessings. It is true that love and fear cannot stay in one place. One has to depart. It is comforting to note that in this poem, she asked love to enter and asked fear to leave. The benefits are also mentioned in the poem; 'she found new blessings'. I wish you the best in this contest.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
Comment from TonyD
You handle the difficult task of getting your story across with such finesse that I am encouraged to try the 5-7-5 format again.
The idea that formed the basis for your poem teaches a lesson in seeking love without being afraid.
TonyD
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You handle the difficult task of getting your story across with such finesse that I am encouraged to try the 5-7-5 format again.
The idea that formed the basis for your poem teaches a lesson in seeking love without being afraid.
TonyD
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
Comment from Ben Colder
You found the secret poet. The write is in line with the rule and you are right. It is the only way it will work. Blessings to you in the contest.
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You found the secret poet. The write is in line with the rule and you are right. It is the only way it will work. Blessings to you in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
Comment from DonandVicki
A very nice 5-7-5 poem. Prayer has worked so many times for me. Fear originates from with in and prayer can chase out the devil. Nice poem. Don
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A very nice 5-7-5 poem. Prayer has worked so many times for me. Fear originates from with in and prayer can chase out the devil. Nice poem. Don
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
Comment from Erik McGinley
In a sense I can relate to this.
When I wa around 24 I decided between one day and the next that I was going to start being more positive about my life and the people in it.
This worked fine until the people in my life took that for an opportunity to consider me the same shit ass they were and started treating me as such:P
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In a sense I can relate to this.
When I wa around 24 I decided between one day and the next that I was going to start being more positive about my life and the people in it.
This worked fine until the people in my life took that for an opportunity to consider me the same shit ass they were and started treating me as such:P
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2014