Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 84 "Questions"My book of poems and stories
20 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I liked this entry into the competition.
Very good flow to the piece with well chosen words and continuous theme carried throughout.
Nicely penned and good luck
GMG
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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Hi there,
I liked this entry into the competition.
Very good flow to the piece with well chosen words and continuous theme carried throughout.
Nicely penned and good luck
GMG
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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I do thank you for your review and comments. I know it takes time to do this and I appreciate your time. Thanks again.
Comment from mbagby23
This is in good timing for school is back in for some and about to start for others. This would be a good posted up in a class room. Great picture as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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This is in good timing for school is back in for some and about to start for others. This would be a good posted up in a class room. Great picture as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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Thank you for your review and comments. I do appreciate the time invested in reviewing my poem. Thanks again.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Good ABC poem. But I can see each line like standing alone. I think a more blending of the whole lines could help better to enhance your chosen theme. Maybe a more crafty choice of words could have done the blending. But it is a good job overall.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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Good ABC poem. But I can see each line like standing alone. I think a more blending of the whole lines could help better to enhance your chosen theme. Maybe a more crafty choice of words could have done the blending. But it is a good job overall.
ola thomas
Comment Written 18-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2015
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Thanks so much for your review. In re-reading my poem I can see where you are coming from. Looks like I go back to my dictionary. I appreciate you comments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Intriguing artwork for your poem.
-With a few words you have written a poem that is 'thought provoking,' as you state in line four.
-I like how the last three lines lead into one another, and the meaning expressed in them.
-One thing you want to be careful of when entering a poem is to make sure you choose the Poem Category, not General Fiction. It means your work is posted like the chapters and story section, and it makes the appearance different.
-A number of people have had trouble with this. Tom, the site administrator is the only one who can change this particular situation. Use the "Contact Us" link under Community, tell him the problem, and he will fix it for you. You have a lot of money posted for your work and don't want it to be in the wrong place.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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-Intriguing artwork for your poem.
-With a few words you have written a poem that is 'thought provoking,' as you state in line four.
-I like how the last three lines lead into one another, and the meaning expressed in them.
-One thing you want to be careful of when entering a poem is to make sure you choose the Poem Category, not General Fiction. It means your work is posted like the chapters and story section, and it makes the appearance different.
-A number of people have had trouble with this. Tom, the site administrator is the only one who can change this particular situation. Use the "Contact Us" link under Community, tell him the problem, and he will fix it for you. You have a lot of money posted for your work and don't want it to be in the wrong place.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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I do thank you for your review and suggestion. I sent a message and will pay more attention when I enter again. I appreciate it that you took the time to explain that to me. Thank you, thank you.
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You are very welcome for the review and suggestion. The longer you are on FS, the more you learn from other people. That is how I learned about the posting.
Comment from TAB_that's me
It could apply to any age as it is important to keep learning and keep thinking. Good ABC form. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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It could apply to any age as it is important to keep learning and keep thinking. Good ABC form. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 17-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind comments. I do appreciate your time to review my work.. Thanks again.
Comment from Lulube
A sound, informative, abc style. Why are there questions? The need to know. To understand better. To nail someone in their lie. lol
good work
lulube
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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A sound, informative, abc style. Why are there questions? The need to know. To understand better. To nail someone in their lie. lol
good work
lulube
Comment Written 16-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2015
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work. I do appreciate it.
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welcome
lulube
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo of a little boy that complements your poem perfectly. A perfect ABC poem with a good flow. The message is very nice as well. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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Excellent photo of a little boy that complements your poem perfectly. A perfect ABC poem with a good flow. The message is very nice as well. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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I thank you for you kind remarks regarding my work and I appreciate the time you gave for your review.
Comment from harleyangelbrat
This is a very well written contest entry. It says so much in just a few words. I love the picture that you used. It really goes well with your poem. It is very descriptive and expressive. I enjoyed reading this very much. God bless you!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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This is a very well written contest entry. It says so much in just a few words. I love the picture that you used. It really goes well with your poem. It is very descriptive and expressive. I enjoyed reading this very much. God bless you!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2015
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Thank you very much for your kind comments. I do appreciate the time you took to review my work.
Comment from Eric1
Hi AnnieDawn, this is an excellent entry for this particular competition,wonderful words with an equally wonderful message within, I truly wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015
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Hi AnnieDawn, this is an excellent entry for this particular competition,wonderful words with an equally wonderful message within, I truly wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015
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I do thank you for your kind comments regarding my entry.
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You are very welcome my friend.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements beautifully with perfect ABC construction. I love your approach as learning is something we should never grow tired of - no matter how old we get. Your rhythm and word choices are wonderful and inspiring. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it. WELCOME BACK!!!!!!!
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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully with perfect ABC construction. I love your approach as learning is something we should never grow tired of - no matter how old we get. Your rhythm and word choices are wonderful and inspiring. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it. WELCOME BACK!!!!!!!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2015
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Thank you for your kind comments on my entry.