Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

A very nice poem about a woman who has given all she has to give to a man who can't seem to find the love she deserves. It seems like he is given to cause problems with whoever he's with, and she's good to be rid of him.

Nice job,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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Comment from P1

Excellent

really love this brill lyric so true and from the heart i think one time or another we have all been here.. great read and well written xx

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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Comment from artemis53

Excellent

And another one of those nasty, cheating hearts that we all seem to have in our past. Too bad you can't blast him with this one but their usually already gone.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

Everyone hates a cheating partner. It is best not to go back. Cheaters are seldom cured. There is a thin line between love and hate; both are such powerful emotions that drive us forward or backward, depending on where we allow our emotions to take us.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015

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Comment from krys123

Excellent

Ine;
-I enjoyed these lyrics very well as they had a good hook which is something that makes one remember the lyrics and comes back to that in their mind.
-The concept is universal which is a good thing to remember in an easy one at that.
-It has good rhythm and a good flow to it.
-I can see his potential in a song as I am a writer myself and a songwriter singer.
-If you are interested in my website is: krys123654.wix.com/alex-krysyna
-You can listen to my songs under the TAB 'collections'.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and may the Lord be with you always.
Alex

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Robina
How nice a song lyric
About don't you ever come back you cheating man
Did you get your inspiration from one of
Corry Konings songs?

Gert

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Cheaters will always lose in the end. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, How can one be a winner when the lose everything in the end?

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015

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reply by c_lucas on 21-Sep-2015

You're welcome, Ine. Charlie

Comment from Benjamin Valencia

Excellent

Hi Robina. Splendid write. It was penned from a kind and merciful heart because you inferred three times in the past that you came back after what he did. I hope this wasn't a true story, but because it sounds very deep, It's likely that it is. Sorry about this. If a man does it once, he'll do it again. What I liked about your write was that the flow was very good. Now, I did feel like I hit a bump here...."As what you call love finishes suddenly." ...It's the word 'as' that I seem to have a problem with. You used it twice, once in the line before and it felt a bit awkward to me. Anyways, take care and cheers.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely weekend ahead. No, not about me.

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

This is a touching song! One that is relatable to millions of souls of the world. I can only imagine the notes you will add to this wonderfully crafted piece.
God bless!
Steve

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

This lady looks like someone I know...but I have no idea who it is...weird.

This is a familiar situation you're talking about here. 'Someone done someone wrong', as almost all the country music songs say! *smile*

Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2015

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