Poems By AnnieDawn
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Comment from yoel1
I like the syllable poem but I not sure, or can I relate to what is a sex cake. I know the poem is short but I would love to be able to compare heath bar baked in a sex cake. Trying to see the image is a little difficult for me
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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I like the syllable poem but I not sure, or can I relate to what is a sex cake. I know the poem is short but I would love to be able to compare heath bar baked in a sex cake. Trying to see the image is a little difficult for me
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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I put the 'Better than sex' in italics because it is an actual recipe. It looks like the picture when baked and is so rich and flavorful that so the name I guess. It was passed on to me and lives up to it's name. I could barely get through one piece. I would be glad to pass the recipe on if I can figure how. Thanks for reviewing.
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Send a piece over. I will taste it for you, Smile!
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BETTER THAN SEX CAKE
1 package German chocolate cake mix
1 jar Mrs, Richardson's Butterscotch Caramel Fudge Topping
1 can sweetened condensed milk
Cool whip
Heath Toffee Bars
Bake cake according tp package directions in a 9x13 pan. Poke holes in cake. (I use the handle of a wooden spoon) Combine topping and milk and pour over cooled cake. Top with cool whip and crushed Heath bars. Serve and enjoy.
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BETTER THAN SEX CAKE
1 package German chocolate cake mix
1 jar Mrs, Richardson's Butterscotch Caramel Fudge Topping
1 can sweetened condensed milk
Cool whip
Heath Toffee Bars
Bake cake according tp package directions in a 9x13 pan. Poke holes in cake. (I use the handle of a wooden spoon) Combine topping and milk and pour over cooled cake. Top with cool whip and crushed Heath bars. Serve and enjoy.
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Thank you!
Comment from robyn corum
Yes, please! I would be happy to have a slice of that cake. If you can't find enough people - I would be happy to take a second slice, also. That's how nice a girl I am!! *smile* heehee
Great poem -- good luck!
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Yes, please! I would be happy to have a slice of that cake. If you can't find enough people - I would be happy to take a second slice, also. That's how nice a girl I am!! *smile* heehee
Great poem -- good luck!
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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I put the 'Better than sex' in italics because it is an actual recipe. It looks like the picture when baked and is so rich and flavorful that so the name I guess. It was passed on to me and lives up to it's name. I could barely get through one piece. I would be glad to pass the recipe on if I can figure how. Thanks for reviewing.
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BETTER THAN SEX CAKE
1 package German chocolate cake mix
1 jar Mrs, Richardson's Butterscotch Caramel Fudge Topping
1 can sweetened condensed milk
Cool whip
Heath Toffee Bars
Bake cake according tp package directions in a 9x13 pan. Poke holes in cake. (I use the handle of a wooden spoon) Combine topping and milk and pour over cooled cake. Top with cool whip and crushed Heath bars. Serve and enjoy.
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THANKS!
Comment from Dr. Nad
Heath bar Is a great entry for the candy 565 writing prompt contest. You have selected a marvelous picture to go with the wonderful whimsical poem that leaves little doubt as to where your priorities lie! LOL I love it! Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Heath bar Is a great entry for the candy 565 writing prompt contest. You have selected a marvelous picture to go with the wonderful whimsical poem that leaves little doubt as to where your priorities lie! LOL I love it! Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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I put the 'Better than sex' in italics because it is an actual recipe. It looks like the picture when baked and is so rich and flavorful that so the name I guess. It was passed on to me and lives up to it's name. I could barely get through one piece. I would be glad to pass the recipe on if I can figure how. Thanks for reviewing.
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You are most welcome.
Embrace the love from above!
Comment from foxangie123
I am hungry. Yummy that looks so good and your words without a picture makes it great as well. Way to go on this. I can smell it cooking. Wow.
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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I am hungry. Yummy that looks so good and your words without a picture makes it great as well. Way to go on this. I can smell it cooking. Wow.
Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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I put the 'Better than sex' in italics because it is an actual recipe. It looks like the picture when baked and is so rich and flavorful that so the name I guess. It was passed on to me and lives up to it's name. I could barely get through one piece. I would be glad to pass the recipe on if I can figure how. Thanks for reviewing.
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Send it please if you do. Great writing.
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BETTER THAN SEX CAKE
1 package German chocolate cake mix
1 jar Mrs, Richardson's Butterscotch Caramel Fudge Topping
1 can sweetened condensed milk
Cool whip
Heath Toffee Bars
Bake cake according tp package directions in a 9x13 pan. Poke holes in cake. (I use the handle of a wooden spoon) Combine topping and milk and pour over cooled cake. Top with cool whip and crushed Heath bars. Serve and enjoy.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. You have done a great job with this writing prompt. The picture you used makes my mouth water. It looks so good. I could find no errors. good work.
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reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Excellent. You have done a great job with this writing prompt. The picture you used makes my mouth water. It looks so good. I could find no errors. good work.
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Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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I put the 'Better than sex' in italics because it is an actual recipe. It looks like the picture when baked and is so rich and flavorful that so the name I guess. It was passed on to me and lives up to it's name. I could barely get through one piece. I would be glad to pass the recipe on if I can figure how. Thanks for reviewing.
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BETTER THAN SEX CAKE
1 package German chocolate cake mix
1 jar Mrs, Richardson's Butterscotch Caramel Fudge Topping
1 can sweetened condensed milk
Cool whip
Heath Toffee Bars
Bake cake according tp package directions in a 9x13 pan. Poke holes in cake. (I use the handle of a wooden spoon) Combine topping and milk and pour over cooled cake. Top with cool whip and crushed Heath bars. Serve and enjoy.
Comment from John Parkin
Your 5 6 5 was great and whimsical and I love a good candy bar but better than a sex cake, I might have to differ on that point. Thanks for the laugh and keep up the good work.
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reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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Your 5 6 5 was great and whimsical and I love a good candy bar but better than a sex cake, I might have to differ on that point. Thanks for the laugh and keep up the good work.
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Comment Written 28-May-2016
reply by the author on 28-May-2016
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I put the 'Better than sex' in italics because it is an actual recipe. It looks like the picture when baked and is so rich and flavorful that so the name I guess. It was passed on to me and lives up to it's name. I could barely get through one piece. I would be glad to pass the recipe on if I can figure how. Thanks for reviewing.
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BETTER THAN SEX CAKE
1 package German chocolate cake mix
1 jar Mrs, Richardson's Butterscotch Caramel Fudge Topping
1 can sweetened condensed milk
Cool whip
Heath Toffee Bars
Bake cake according tp package directions in a 9x13 pan. Poke holes in cake. (I use the handle of a wooden spoon) Combine topping and milk and pour over cooled cake. Top with cool whip and crushed Heath bars. Serve and enjoy.
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I will try your recipe and maybe I will have a change of heart. thanks for the recipe