Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Stop The Violence"My book of poems and stories
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is an awesome poem for survivors of abuse. Your lines flow smoothly with an awesome message. Good job on the format and the choice of art.
Good job and thanks for your help. Good job. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016
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This is an awesome poem for survivors of abuse. Your lines flow smoothly with an awesome message. Good job on the format and the choice of art.
Good job and thanks for your help. Good job. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 09-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016
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My thanks to you for your kind review. To often abuse goes on unreported and unknown by anyone other than the victim and the perpetrator. The goal is to stop the cycle.
Comment from mrs jordan
Hi ANNIEDAWN. This is a very emotional heartfelt poem. It sounds like a young girl has been used, molested, beaten, and sold for money. It seems nobody likes her, but now she has somehow gotten the strength to get away from this person and become a better person herself. This is great poem. I really like it.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016
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Hi ANNIEDAWN. This is a very emotional heartfelt poem. It sounds like a young girl has been used, molested, beaten, and sold for money. It seems nobody likes her, but now she has somehow gotten the strength to get away from this person and become a better person herself. This is great poem. I really like it.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016
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My thanks to you for your kind review. To often abuse goes on unreported and unknown by anyone other than the victim and the perpetrator. The goal is to stop the cycle.
Comment from patcelaw
Growing up in a home with domestic violence makes a child, especially a girl looking for love in the wrong places. They confuse sex for love. Then we wonder why we have so many girls getting pregnant out of wedlock. Patricia
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Growing up in a home with domestic violence makes a child, especially a girl looking for love in the wrong places. They confuse sex for love. Then we wonder why we have so many girls getting pregnant out of wedlock. Patricia
Comment Written 09-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016
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My thanks to you for your kind review. To often abuse goes on unreported and unknown by anyone other than the victim and the perpetrator. The goal is to stop the cycle.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
It is unthinkable that a parent can harm his own child in such a brutal way. Most abuse is totally unnecessary in the first place. Why should he be protected?
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It is unthinkable that a parent can harm his own child in such a brutal way. Most abuse is totally unnecessary in the first place. Why should he be protected?
Comment Written 09-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016
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My thanks to you for your kind review. To often abuse goes on unreported and unknown by anyone other than the victim and the perpetrator. The goal is to stop the cycle.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello Annie,
You tell a loaded tale within the staccato lines of this minute poem.
You must see a tragic and ugly side of life in your work as a volunteer.
A triumphant conclusion - a survivor. Yes!
Until next time,
Sonali
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016
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Hello Annie,
You tell a loaded tale within the staccato lines of this minute poem.
You must see a tragic and ugly side of life in your work as a volunteer.
A triumphant conclusion - a survivor. Yes!
Until next time,
Sonali
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016
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My thanks to you for your kind review. To often abuse goes on unreported and unknown by anyone other than the victim and the perpetrator. The goal is to stop the cycle.
Comment from royowen
I hate abuse, either physical or mental, it is an insult to the very dignity that inherently belongs to all human beings. I particularly hate the abuse to children which can be a lifelong sentence for the child! Well done, firstly for speaking out, secondly for volunteer work, and thirdly for this wonderful minute poem as an entry in this contest, beautifully written in emphatic and articulate verse, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016
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I hate abuse, either physical or mental, it is an insult to the very dignity that inherently belongs to all human beings. I particularly hate the abuse to children which can be a lifelong sentence for the child! Well done, firstly for speaking out, secondly for volunteer work, and thirdly for this wonderful minute poem as an entry in this contest, beautifully written in emphatic and articulate verse, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2016
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My thanks to you for your kind review. To often abuse goes on unreported and unknown by anyone other than the victim and the perpetrator. The goal is to stop the cycle.
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Absolutely, well done, Roy