Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Heavenly Adventure"a place to gather my poetic forms
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Comment from DR DIP
Not as keen with this rhyme scheme Luna as the other poem, still a good poem nonetheless Just read your author's notes Sorry about the loss of your son.
dip
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Not as keen with this rhyme scheme Luna as the other poem, still a good poem nonetheless Just read your author's notes Sorry about the loss of your son.
dip
Comment Written 08-Dec-2016
Comment from bertranclan
Very intelligently written! I had never heard of the HexSonnetta before, so you taught me something new; thank you. It's a bit haunting, too, which I like. Keep writing; your poetic forms are really challenging!
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Very intelligently written! I had never heard of the HexSonnetta before, so you taught me something new; thank you. It's a bit haunting, too, which I like. Keep writing; your poetic forms are really challenging!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
Comment from Janet Foor
Exceptional artwork for this hexsonneta. I have a friend who fells her dad visits her every she sees a cardinal.
Very nice to read one of your earlier works.
Blessings
Janet
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Exceptional artwork for this hexsonneta. I have a friend who fells her dad visits her every she sees a cardinal.
Very nice to read one of your earlier works.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
Comment from robyn corum
Luna,
What a delightful poetic form! I'm so glad you've introduced us! I bet you'll be seeing this again. HAHAHAHAHA! I love the fact that you see your son again in the form of butterflies - a friend of mine has visits from her mother in the form of ladybugs. (Does that sound silly?) She believes it down to her toes. And from the stories she's told me, she has me believing it, too. *smile*
Thanks!
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Luna,
What a delightful poetic form! I'm so glad you've introduced us! I bet you'll be seeing this again. HAHAHAHAHA! I love the fact that you see your son again in the form of butterflies - a friend of mine has visits from her mother in the form of ladybugs. (Does that sound silly?) She believes it down to her toes. And from the stories she's told me, she has me believing it, too. *smile*
Thanks!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
Comment from Dean Kuch
Helios, Greek mythology's god and personification of the sun, and the lovely Selene, the Greek goddess Titan of the moon. Helios was one of the Titans, son of Hyperion and Theia. He was the personification of the Sun and his sisters were the goddesses Selene (the Moon) and Eos (the Dawn). ... Helios did not play a major part in Greek mythology, as he was eventually replaced by Apollo.
I really hope that when I die for good, I see something like you've pictured here and NOT what I witnessed when I died for nearly four minutes in 2010.
I NEVER wish to return to THAT place again...
Luvely, Luna.
~Dean
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Helios, Greek mythology's god and personification of the sun, and the lovely Selene, the Greek goddess Titan of the moon. Helios was one of the Titans, son of Hyperion and Theia. He was the personification of the Sun and his sisters were the goddesses Selene (the Moon) and Eos (the Dawn). ... Helios did not play a major part in Greek mythology, as he was eventually replaced by Apollo.
I really hope that when I die for good, I see something like you've pictured here and NOT what I witnessed when I died for nearly four minutes in 2010.
I NEVER wish to return to THAT place again...
Luvely, Luna.
~Dean
Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
Comment from Ella25
He is already there waiting for you to come one day. Butterflies represent death, I like the image, though. Well done on your HexSonnetta. Blessings, Ella
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He is already there waiting for you to come one day. Butterflies represent death, I like the image, though. Well done on your HexSonnetta. Blessings, Ella
Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
Comment from lyenochka
Beautifully written. Thank you for introducing me to the hexsonnetta. It has such a natural speech and comforting rhythm. The words makes me think of an eclipse when sun and moon seem to meet. Then end is comforting that they will meet again.
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Beautifully written. Thank you for introducing me to the hexsonnetta. It has such a natural speech and comforting rhythm. The words makes me think of an eclipse when sun and moon seem to meet. Then end is comforting that they will meet again.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2016
Comment from Teri7
This is a very sweet and sad what you have written. I am so very sorry for the loss of your son! I love that you used a butterfly. Very good wording and imagery. Love, Teri
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This is a very sweet and sad what you have written. I am so very sorry for the loss of your son! I love that you used a butterfly. Very good wording and imagery. Love, Teri
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
Comment from Irish Rain
So very pretty. That it was written years ago, before your son passed, with your feeling, does seem prophetic. A most lovely poem, blessings...
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So very pretty. That it was written years ago, before your son passed, with your feeling, does seem prophetic. A most lovely poem, blessings...
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016
Comment from misscookie
I have no more stars to give , the artwork you choose to go with your poem is a very exceptional piece
I see within the butterflies wings the face of a a young tiger. That is yours and my son who passed away and the butterflies is my daughter who loved butterflies and passed away also
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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I have no more stars to give , the artwork you choose to go with your poem is a very exceptional piece
I see within the butterflies wings the face of a a young tiger. That is yours and my son who passed away and the butterflies is my daughter who loved butterflies and passed away also
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 06-Dec-2016