Spring on Tour
Spring is the rock star of seasons.19 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written spring the time when everything comes to fie and new beginnings looking forward to the sunshine I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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Yes this is well written spring the time when everything comes to fie and new beginnings looking forward to the sunshine I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your positive words.
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your poem "Spring on Tour". I could just picture the concert as they all the parade in their colorful costumes.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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I enjoyed reading your poem "Spring on Tour". I could just picture the concert as they all the parade in their colorful costumes.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your good words and good wishes.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Asem.inspirations
You did a great describing spring. Your poem catches the attention of it's readers and excites them about Springtime. It has me looking forward to all of the great things you described that happen in the springtime. I am a big fan of the Springtime as well. New York winters always have me eagerly looking forward to Spring and the Summer. Good poem. You should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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You did a great describing spring. Your poem catches the attention of it's readers and excites them about Springtime. It has me looking forward to all of the great things you described that happen in the springtime. I am a big fan of the Springtime as well. New York winters always have me eagerly looking forward to Spring and the Summer. Good poem. You should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your detailed review and encouragement.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nicely penned poem.
-I like the comparison between spring and a concert.
-That is quite imaginative.
-Descriptions and imagery are very good and detailed.
-The conclusion ties your poem together very well.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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-Very nicely penned poem.
-I like the comparison between spring and a concert.
-That is quite imaginative.
-Descriptions and imagery are very good and detailed.
-The conclusion ties your poem together very well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the detailed review and encouraging remarks.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good poem you have penned about spring for the Spring prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Best wishes! Teri
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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This is a very good poem you have penned about spring for the Spring prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Best wishes! Teri
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the encouraging words.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
It is stated on tour in exaltation that spring is the rock star of all seasons; because it is known for its beauty and grace, perfume in the air, songbirds sing, woodpeckers play the drums, best concert deserves a Grammy, and poet is its fan; I like, enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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It is stated on tour in exaltation that spring is the rock star of all seasons; because it is known for its beauty and grace, perfume in the air, songbirds sing, woodpeckers play the drums, best concert deserves a Grammy, and poet is its fan; I like, enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your attention to detail.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
An excellent contest entry. You describe spring as if I could look out my window and see it. Your style is perfect. The meter is spot on.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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An excellent contest entry. You describe spring as if I could look out my window and see it. Your style is perfect. The meter is spot on.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
Comment from dovemarie
I love spring, and any kind of poem about spring. I liked the way you pictured Spring as being "on tour," I liked your depiction of "songbirds" and "woodpeckers" being the musicians, as Spring's backups. Also I could practically smell Spring's "perfume" in the air. Great poem! Dove
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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I love spring, and any kind of poem about spring. I liked the way you pictured Spring as being "on tour," I liked your depiction of "songbirds" and "woodpeckers" being the musicians, as Spring's backups. Also I could practically smell Spring's "perfume" in the air. Great poem! Dove
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your attention to detail and encouragement.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Your moving piece about spring's arrival made me smile. The imagery you created with your words comes through loud and clear. Thank you for sharing this charming piece and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Your moving piece about spring's arrival made me smile. The imagery you created with your words comes through loud and clear. Thank you for sharing this charming piece and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your very positive words and wishes.