Comment from N.K. Wagner

Excellent

This poem is so very encouraging to a fresh young woman beginning her life in the real world. Of course she can single-handedly change the world. Why are adults so stupid? Isn't it obvious that her way is best? (Yes, I raised one of those.) Well done. Good luck in your contest. :) Nancy

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 Comment Written 18-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

She probably will change a few things. You can't argue with her, that's for sure.
Thank you for you kind review and words of wisdom! :)

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

Hello my friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I think that this is a great poem to write for your granddaughters success. I can feel some emotions in this and I love the way that this flows. Thank you so much for sharing this. God bless you. With love, Lola

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 Comment Written 18-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017

Lola, thank you. I appreciate your gracious review.
I wish I had a reviewer rec left for you but afraid I don't.
Thanks again, though.
Katharine