Felix my feline friend
A Most unusual Cat19 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a warm sweet write about how you came to look after Felix, such a kind act to have taken the cat in and give it a home, brought a tear to my eye. We had a rescue cat for 17 years called Jake and he was just a joy, animals can bring a new dimension to your life, bring hope and love into your world like nothing else, I really enjoyed your wonderful story, you brightened my Sunday, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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This is a warm sweet write about how you came to look after Felix, such a kind act to have taken the cat in and give it a home, brought a tear to my eye. We had a rescue cat for 17 years called Jake and he was just a joy, animals can bring a new dimension to your life, bring hope and love into your world like nothing else, I really enjoyed your wonderful story, you brightened my Sunday, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Dear Dolly, Thank you for your review and the five stars. Thank you also for letting me know you are a kindred spirit. It is so pleasant to met someone who is on the same wavelength. Felix will be the subject of future stories, so I hope you enjoy them as much as this one. cheers Cass
Comment from damommy
This is a lovely story about Felix, Cass. I'm looking forward to hearing more about him.
Felix looks like one of my cats name PC. He, too, is a most unusual cat.
I'm so happy you joined our club.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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This is a lovely story about Felix, Cass. I'm looking forward to hearing more about him.
Felix looks like one of my cats name PC. He, too, is a most unusual cat.
I'm so happy you joined our club.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Dear Friend, Thank you for your review and the five stars. I didn't have any photos of Felix that I could put on the screen as he died long before there were such things, but the picture I found is so like him it is amazing. There will be more stories about him and his frail little companion Tiki. cheers Cass
Comment from jusylee72
I love animal stories and this one is no exception. It is fun and sweet. I am so happy your heart took in this poor little kitty and gave him a home and love. I enjoyed your story.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I love animal stories and this one is no exception. It is fun and sweet. I am so happy your heart took in this poor little kitty and gave him a home and love. I enjoyed your story.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Dear Jusylee, Thank you for your review and the five stars. Felix brought so much into our lives with his wise, little ways and amusing behaviour, it was a meet reward for the act of giving him a home. There are more stories about Felix to come. I hope you enjoy them too. Cheers Cass
Comment from Joy Graham
Hi Cass,
I'm a sucker for a good cat story, and I enjoyed his one :) We have had many cats and dogs over the years. They all have their own personalities.
Just a few things I noticed while reading.
- "...shivering,black kitten..." - Evil Eddie put a comma in there that shouldn't be there I think.
- "...Mr. Paxton looked him over." - need a space here between the end of this sentence and the start of the next sentence.
- "...he reassured me"Nothing a shot of Penicillin..." - "...he reassured me, "Nothing..."
- "...to my door as a shivering ,maimed scrap..." - shivering, maimed - shift the comma to the left.
- headlights are one word?
- "...to wait for my husband to come in." - need a space after this line and before the next paragraph.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Hi Cass,
I'm a sucker for a good cat story, and I enjoyed his one :) We have had many cats and dogs over the years. They all have their own personalities.
Just a few things I noticed while reading.
- "...shivering,black kitten..." - Evil Eddie put a comma in there that shouldn't be there I think.
- "...Mr. Paxton looked him over." - need a space here between the end of this sentence and the start of the next sentence.
- "...he reassured me"Nothing a shot of Penicillin..." - "...he reassured me, "Nothing..."
- "...to my door as a shivering ,maimed scrap..." - shivering, maimed - shift the comma to the left.
- headlights are one word?
- "...to wait for my husband to come in." - need a space after this line and before the next paragraph.
Joy xx
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Dear Joy, Thank you for your review and the five stars. You eagle eye picked up several points that I had overlooked, so I have heeded your wise words and fixed'em up. This has been a delight to write as I have been wanting to flex my prose muscles for some time now. With Felix's adventurous life I now have a subject to really get going on. cheers Cass
Comment from Kathy Allmon
What a great story. Im not a big cat fan but I can feel the love you have for Felix. The story flowed and I dont think I would change a thing. Cant wait to read your next post.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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What a great story. Im not a big cat fan but I can feel the love you have for Felix. The story flowed and I dont think I would change a thing. Cant wait to read your next post.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Dear Kathy, thank you for your review and the five stars. Felix was an unusual cat in that he seemed to have an understanding in excess of purely animal instincts. As much as I loved him I think he loved me equally. The next Felix story won't be long in coming. I hope you enjoy it as much as this one . cheers Cass
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I cant wait for the next Felix story.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I love your story about Felix the unusual cat. We had a tabby once that thought he was a dog. Best kind of cat there is, I think.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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I love your story about Felix the unusual cat. We had a tabby once that thought he was a dog. Best kind of cat there is, I think.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Dear Sharon, Thank you for your review and the five stars. Yes, I knew a cat that thought he was a dog. He was hilarious. Poor thing though, boy! was he confused. It did improve a bit when one day he got scared up a tree, and sat there looking down at everyone rather smugly. He got down on his own when he got hungry and after that the'd shinny up anything vertical just to show us he didn't do it by accident. cheers Cass
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about Felix, the most unusual cat, unforgettable is his friendship with the author; he saved author from a stray dog; he was affectionate and helpful in domestic affairs; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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This speaks about Felix, the most unusual cat, unforgettable is his friendship with the author; he saved author from a stray dog; he was affectionate and helpful in domestic affairs; well written, well done. B A CHANGE INSPIRER-WRITER --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Dear Friend, thank you for your review and the five stars. I am glad you read and enjoyed my story. Cheers Cass
Comment from Ben Colder
Good story Cass. U had a little dog named tiki . Such a delight. I can relate to the obedience the cat shows your husband. Enjoyed the write I find no mistakes.
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Good story Cass. U had a little dog named tiki . Such a delight. I can relate to the obedience the cat shows your husband. Enjoyed the write I find no mistakes.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Dear Ben, Than you for your review and the five stars. Yes Felix knew who brought home the bacon and cuddled up to him shamelessly. But Felix was MY cat. .He would sit on the lap of any "cat" person who visited, but ignore anyone who didn't like cats, treating them to a haughty flick of his long, black tail before curling up to sleep nearby. He had many human traits, but was endearingly feline. Cheers Cass
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and very sweet story about Felix. You used some great heartfelt words when talking about Felix. You used great imagery from the art work. Very good job! Blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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This is a very well written and very sweet story about Felix. You used some great heartfelt words when talking about Felix. You used great imagery from the art work. Very good job! Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2018
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Dear Teri, Thank you for your review and the five stars. Felix was a very special little "fur person" and writing about him stirs tender memories requiring sweet words . cheers Cass
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He sounded so sweet and loving!