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Shaking the Family Tree

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written chapter of the family tree and the ties that hold you all together while some never break the bonds and ties that kept them in addiction while others win the addiction and start living a normal life.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
    Thanks for following. Will try and make the next chapters shorter.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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Another well written chapter to your story.
I'm continually amazed at seeing examples of my own life and upbringing coming up in your stories.
I guess the big difference would be that both my parents were alcoholics. But the stories are the same.
Thank you for sharing this.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 12-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
    Thank you for following. Will keep the following chapters shorter.
Comment from Swampfox1
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Quite a tale it is about drinking away the sorrow and bring woe unto others. Your mention of Red Hanks the bar brings to mind neighborhood bars and local experiences and finding that Moe Bandy's "I wish they'd close every honky tonk in town" blared my most favorite lyrics. I did not find any errors in this and you have, once again, done a very good job. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 12-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
    Thank you for following. Will try and keep the next chapters shorter.