Geoff's Ramblings
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha. It's called 'Murphy's Law. I enjoyed your little story. My only suggestion is to write out the numbers in words. I read Sasha's rambles, too. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Haha. It's called 'Murphy's Law. I enjoyed your little story. My only suggestion is to write out the numbers in words. I read Sasha's rambles, too. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 30-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2018
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Yeah well I did the numbers in words and Bob Hartson said to do numbers so I changed them. I give up! HeHe. Thanks. I think I will go back and change it to words.Murphy's Law that's it of course.
Comment from Joan E.
I mentioned to Sasha that she inspired you to post rambles, and she said she knew and was proud to motivate your reflections. Thank you for reminding us that our lives are filled with cycles--even simple tissue boxes. (Have you noticed how some brands have far more tissues for the money?) Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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I mentioned to Sasha that she inspired you to post rambles, and she said she knew and was proud to motivate your reflections. Thank you for reminding us that our lives are filled with cycles--even simple tissue boxes. (Have you noticed how some brands have far more tissues for the money?) Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 29-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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Yes on value depending on brands. Actually that is one of the few things around here that seem to be comparatively the same price wise, between our various supermarket chains, even where some charge a lot more for a whole lot of other commodities, but you are right about value as to price in a lot of cases. She told me it was you said that about what I said too.
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I'm glad to hear that good news also travels fast on FanStory! Keep sharing your insights- Joan
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Geoff. I think this ramble idea of yours (and Sasha's) is a good one. I wissh you every success with it. I know exactly where you are with the tissue boxes. Thank Goodness there are less noses than boxes, mate. :) Bob
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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Hi, Geoff. I think this ramble idea of yours (and Sasha's) is a good one. I wissh you every success with it. I know exactly where you are with the tissue boxes. Thank Goodness there are less noses than boxes, mate. :) Bob
Comment Written 29-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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Ha, right on mate. Yep- Sasha made a good p[oi9nt as well...same wi8th the batteries. I think all our A/c remote batteries are due for replacement. Thanks for coming along.
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LOL check your typing here Mate. Numbers in place of letters. Were you aware of that? Bob
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Thanks, Bob will do and yes I was aware maybe I forgot, hehe.
Comment from c_lucas
Tissues will always come in handy and a smart person will keep a box or two close by. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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Tissues will always come in handy and a smart person will keep a box or two close by. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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Thanks Bro Charlie I appreciate your review and Sasha for giving me the Ramblings idea.
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You're welcome, Geoff.
Comment from Hugh McDowell
This is excellent work. Such a simple subject written with a degree of elegance. Love the idea of a cycle of things in and around the house. The artwork is amazing! That's what actually drove me to look at the writing. Nice job.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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This is excellent work. Such a simple subject written with a degree of elegance. Love the idea of a cycle of things in and around the house. The artwork is amazing! That's what actually drove me to look at the writing. Nice job.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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Thanks Hugh I don't believe we have met before. This was just another ramble. Rambles are inspired by my good friend and fellow FStorian Sasha in Mexico. Will look for your stuff as I have time. I am a great believer in reciprocating on reviewing.
Comment from meeshu
well, you certainly pay attention to detail and don't seem to miss much that goes on around you, Sankey. i look forward to your treatise on toothpicks, it's all in jest...........meeshu
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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well, you certainly pay attention to detail and don't seem to miss much that goes on around you, Sankey. i look forward to your treatise on toothpicks, it's all in jest...........meeshu
Comment Written 29-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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Hi meeshu not sure we have met before. Haha on the toothpicks. This is just another Ramble inspired by a good friend and fellow Fanstorian Sasha in Mexico. I recommend you check her stuff out. I will look for your stuff always pleased to meet new folks on FS. I am a great believer in reciprocating on reviews.Thanks for coming along.
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i truly enjoyed the simplicity of your work and i am a fan of sasha already. i have been busy with my book, so i haven't written much new lately. you are welcome to browse my portfolio if you wish as i intend to read more of your work.........meeshu
Comment from Sasha
That is so true. I have the same problem with batteries. I have wall clocks in every room. When one battery dies it is just a matter of hours before the rest die.
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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That is so true. I have the same problem with batteries. I have wall clocks in every room. When one battery dies it is just a matter of hours before the rest die.
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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Yeah now I think about it our a/c remote batteries are all on the way as we speak too...hehe another ramble subject. Thanks old friend. Hoping some new Fanstyorians I have met will come by your Portfolio soon.
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I think a couple have. Thanks for the kind words.
Comment from royowen
We have three on the go at any one time Geoff, but not five, but you've struck a perfect monitor my friend, if one runs out, one can bet his shirt on the rest. Perhaps you can tell the gambling sites, they can bet which is next! Heh heh, well done. Good job,blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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We have three on the go at any one time Geoff, but not five, but you've struck a perfect monitor my friend, if one runs out, one can bet his shirt on the rest. Perhaps you can tell the gambling sites, they can bet which is next! Heh heh, well done. Good job,blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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Hey Bro Sasha my old friend in Mexico reminded me the batteries in our A/c remotes do the same thing. All simultaneously but why not good idea to change them all at once. Thanks Bro