Beautiful Mare
A mare that loved humans so much16 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Kace, so good to see you Sweetie Pie...been staying busy on this side...going to lay the flooring in my bedroom...don't want to pay big bucks like I did for the rest of the house...
I love your story told sweet girl...what a wonderful thing you did getting Lassie away from evil man...and it is wonderful she is where people will love her...and she can feel proud of being who she is...
if you don't want to take care of an animal...DON'T GET ONE...if you want one...they are a many year responsibility...take care of them...and keep them out of bad weather...I love your story took my wonderful sweet friend...and love your picture...take care...we will talk...love you much....Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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HI Kace, so good to see you Sweetie Pie...been staying busy on this side...going to lay the flooring in my bedroom...don't want to pay big bucks like I did for the rest of the house...
I love your story told sweet girl...what a wonderful thing you did getting Lassie away from evil man...and it is wonderful she is where people will love her...and she can feel proud of being who she is...
if you don't want to take care of an animal...DON'T GET ONE...if you want one...they are a many year responsibility...take care of them...and keep them out of bad weather...I love your story took my wonderful sweet friend...and love your picture...take care...we will talk...love you much....Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Hello happy face, True story about Lassie. She gave her heart to me; went to a good home for a crippled child. Love, heaps of hugs baby face...Heh, Heh XXX
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your a true Sweetie Pie my sweet friend...with a heart of gold...bunches of hugs back to you...love you...xxoo
Comment from Teri7
I love this Flash Fiction story about this beautiful mare that you bought. I hate to hear of any human hurting any animal. I am so glad you gave her to the Riding for the Disabled. This is a beautiful story with a happy ending. Best wishes in the contest my friend! love, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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I love this Flash Fiction story about this beautiful mare that you bought. I hate to hear of any human hurting any animal. I am so glad you gave her to the Riding for the Disabled. This is a beautiful story with a happy ending. Best wishes in the contest my friend! love, Teri
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Hello Teri Berry, Thanks for reading my friend. Yes, horse went to a lovely home when she could no longer be ridden. I hope she had some good times with the crippled child. Love, K.
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the Dribble Flash contest Kay, This indeed was a great short story. I always enjoy a humane story. Between your entry and your narrative it was fantastic learning about Lassie.
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Good luck in the Dribble Flash contest Kay, This indeed was a great short story. I always enjoy a humane story. Between your entry and your narrative it was fantastic learning about Lassie.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Good morning my friend, Yes, a good ending to a sad life for Lassie. Eventually, she went to green pastures and a crippled child who adored her. I hope at least some of her life was good. I know St Francis of Assisi would have been smiling. Love, Kay.
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I am sure there were smiles by all
Comment from Sanku
This is very nice of you .Animals are like humans .they get involved and impatient too.
I liked this short write very much .you have given us a good lesson.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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This is very nice of you .Animals are like humans .they get involved and impatient too.
I liked this short write very much .you have given us a good lesson.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Hello Sanku, We all have an obligation to care for animals and especially those in danger like my mare was. Thanks for reading. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a very nice little piece for the competition. The subject matter is one that always does well in these kinds of things. It's well written with no spag I could detect.
The riding for the disabled is a great charity and does so much good. Even better when the animal is a rescue animal too. It's a perfect win-win situation.
All the best
GMG
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Hi there,
This is a very nice little piece for the competition. The subject matter is one that always does well in these kinds of things. It's well written with no spag I could detect.
The riding for the disabled is a great charity and does so much good. Even better when the animal is a rescue animal too. It's a perfect win-win situation.
All the best
GMG
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you GMG or, I could say...GEE-GEE? That's short for horse in my land. Children call horses by that name. Yes, the mare was ill treated and I couldn't stand by and watch animal cruelty. Thanks so much for your comments. Avagoodweekend - short for have a good week end. Hee, Hee. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from country ranch writer
Horses are smarter than people give them credit for. The have more sense than some folks. I love horses and there is no reason ever to beat or mistreat one.
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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Horses are smarter than people give them credit for. The have more sense than some folks. I love horses and there is no reason ever to beat or mistreat one.
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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G'day mate, Yep, she was very ill-treated. In the end she was fat and happy and when she could no longer carry adults, I gave her to a little crippled kid who absolutely adored her. Love, kay.
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