Comment from Christine C Autry

Excellent

Yes real good. I enjoyed all of it. Thank You for this poem. I love to hear about the snow children and the winter glow. Made me feel good reading this because children uplift me. Real nice. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019

Thanks so much for your review. I had fun with this one remembering my kids running for the hills after the first snow in Alaska.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

This is a very good piece, consistent rhymes, good phrasing with great rhythm and flow. a wonderful image of the snowy days of youth, AnnieDawn..........................meeshu

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019

Thanks so much for your review. I had fun with this one remembering my kids running for the hills after the first snow in Alaska.

Comment from Kathleen S.

Excellent

Visual and creative, your poem is delightful to read. I can imagine a bunch of kids playing happily outside in spite of the very cold temperatures in winter time.

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019

Thanks so much for your review. I had fun with this one remembering my kids running for the hills after the first snow in Alaska.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written ABC poem with mono end-rhyme about the snow that brings back the child within us, and we play with our children in the snow and the snowman is built first of course.

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019

Thanks so much for your review. I had fun with this one remembering my kids running for the hills after the first snow in Alaska.