Delighting In Devilish Deeds
Ticking sins off my list.16 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Well, we all stood condemned until faith in Jesus covered all those sins. I guess for me, my greatest sin is pride but it's not one that I enjoy. So I'm not sure how this list of seven was compiled by the Church. Thanks for the fun satirical poem.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Well, we all stood condemned until faith in Jesus covered all those sins. I guess for me, my greatest sin is pride but it's not one that I enjoy. So I'm not sure how this list of seven was compiled by the Church. Thanks for the fun satirical poem.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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I think you should be allowed to be proud, in the right dose that covers pride in one's achievements. I am so pleased you identified this as satire and do not think me sin-ridden.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the seven deadly sins that we all have a part in one or other way, we often think we are not too bad, but when we seriously thinking about it we know we are all sinners if we want to know it or not.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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A very well-written poem about the seven deadly sins that we all have a part in one or other way, we often think we are not too bad, but when we seriously thinking about it we know we are all sinners if we want to know it or not.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Yes, you get it... none of us is without sin. We need to find our way back.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, you are on the slippery slope down now Lisa, all these indulgences! You sound like you are having fun, have a great weekend, a delightful read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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He he he, you are on the slippery slope down now Lisa, all these indulgences! You sound like you are having fun, have a great weekend, a delightful read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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I hope the satirical intent does not get disregarded and folks now think I am a died-in-the-wool hedonist!
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear LisaMay,
I enjoyed your poem, "Delighting In Devilish Deeds"! It is both a fun poem to read and one that stops the reader for a moment to laugh! Your humor is well taken and well written!
My best,
Deborah
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reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Dear LisaMay,
I enjoyed your poem, "Delighting In Devilish Deeds"! It is both a fun poem to read and one that stops the reader for a moment to laugh! Your humor is well taken and well written!
My best,
Deborah
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Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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I am glad you found it entertaining Debra, and had a chuckle perhaps.
Comment from Bill Schott
A nice romp through the deadly sins with an unsympathetic, finger-pointing snort for the unrepentant sinners out in the world. One day .......
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reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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A nice romp through the deadly sins with an unsympathetic, finger-pointing snort for the unrepentant sinners out in the world. One day .......
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Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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So Bill, which sin do you favour a little taste of?
Thanks for reviewing.
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I have mastered them all, and now stand in a repented state.
Comment from LyndaS
Well, you managed to make me laugh out loud again. This is brilliant and so much fun. I thought you might get bogged down slipping around in your lust rant but you came out smelling like a red, red devilish rose. Loved this!! Lynda
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Well, you managed to make me laugh out loud again. This is brilliant and so much fun. I thought you might get bogged down slipping around in your lust rant but you came out smelling like a red, red devilish rose. Loved this!! Lynda
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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A chuckle is always a good sign of empathy... which is your sin of choice, dear generous friend??
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But of course! Unless there's one for celebrating vodka and those that created it.