Thank You FanStory
My writing gets better each time I write with help.18 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Yes, we are a team on FanStory, and we help one another be better writers with our observations and suggestions, as well as encouragement. Keep sharing your gifts and striving to "reach higher". Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Yes, we are a team on FanStory, and we help one another be better writers with our observations and suggestions, as well as encouragement. Keep sharing your gifts and striving to "reach higher". Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
When I found FanStory, I was looking for a local group of writers. I joined never knowing that I would meet so many interesting people and make lasting friendships. This is a great contest entry.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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When I found FanStory, I was looking for a local group of writers. I joined never knowing that I would meet so many interesting people and make lasting friendships. This is a great contest entry.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you, my friend! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a hopeful write that defines your writing objectives, while thanking those who may be reviewing your works. Congratulations for your efforts and commitment - fully compliant with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest...
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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In my opinion, a hopeful write that defines your writing objectives, while thanking those who may be reviewing your works. Congratulations for your efforts and commitment - fully compliant with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest...
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poetry!
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I did not suggest I "enjoyed" your poem. Instead, I offered my congratulations, rather than condolences for this effort and your efforts to date. I did not wish to be completely candid in my opinion, because I am rewarded for my honesty by being muted by supposed sensitive and intelligent writers on this site, perhaps even those who are offering you their assistance, which has not proved at all helpful with this write.
Comment from pome lover
It's always good to keep learning and improving, and no matter how long you write, there is always more to learn, for example, in dialogue, with the ever changing slang of kids and trends of interest.
Good for you for loving to write, for that is what it takes to be a good writer. That and reading.
I'm glad you've found the FS writers friendly and helpful. I think they are, too.
Good luck to you, and most of all,enjoy!
pome lover
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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It's always good to keep learning and improving, and no matter how long you write, there is always more to learn, for example, in dialogue, with the ever changing slang of kids and trends of interest.
Good for you for loving to write, for that is what it takes to be a good writer. That and reading.
I'm glad you've found the FS writers friendly and helpful. I think they are, too.
Good luck to you, and most of all,enjoy!
pome lover
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I am very new to this site and am learning everything about it. I love writing and have a lot of passion for it. I have learned from my mistakes. I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poetry! :)
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learning from mistakes is good.
sometimes I have to re-learn, (smile)
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:) smiles
Comment from kahpot
This is a wonderful tribute to Fan Story, if I may in the 8th line from the bottom "luck" should be lucky, I think FS has helped many not only with writing but inspiration to show their work, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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This is a wonderful tribute to Fan Story, if I may in the 8th line from the bottom "luck" should be lucky, I think FS has helped many not only with writing but inspiration to show their work, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my essay! I will fix the mistake.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-A very sincere and positive
poem about FanStory, and
how you are learning and
improving in your writing.
-It is good that you appreciate
the help that you get.
-I like you ending lines, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-A very sincere and positive
poem about FanStory, and
how you are learning and
improving in your writing.
-It is good that you appreciate
the help that you get.
-I like you ending lines, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my essay!
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Susan Larson
I have been writing for money for over twenty years and I have learned from Fanstory that there is always more to learn. I love this site and all the friendly interaction. I'm a columnist whose brain shuts down after 500 words. I'm learning some mind-expanding stuff here on Fanstory!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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I have been writing for money for over twenty years and I have learned from Fanstory that there is always more to learn. I love this site and all the friendly interaction. I'm a columnist whose brain shuts down after 500 words. I'm learning some mind-expanding stuff here on Fanstory!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my essay!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice post about how Fanstory has benefited you. You gave some very nice examples of how you are writing better thanks to the reviewers that help you. This is a very nice place to write. Thanks for sharing. Please check this one thing out::
I am luck to be a prolific writer.
(lucky)
Blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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This is a very nice post about how Fanstory has benefited you. You gave some very nice examples of how you are writing better thanks to the reviewers that help you. This is a very nice place to write. Thanks for sharing. Please check this one thing out::
I am luck to be a prolific writer.
(lucky)
Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my essay! I will fix the mistake.