Forebearer of the Future
Dreams are a harvest not a gift...17 total reviews
Comment from royowen
I've always thought that as a parent, I was to prepare my child for the future, and then it was their job to grasp it both hands and run with it, and so the baton is relayed. Well done, an excellent 3/5/7 poem, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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I've always thought that as a parent, I was to prepare my child for the future, and then it was their job to grasp it both hands and run with it, and so the baton is relayed. Well done, an excellent 3/5/7 poem, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Yes, dreams aren't free, are they? ;-) Thanks for stopping in on this one, Roy -- Enjoy the weekend!!
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Good job
Comment from Minglement
You prefaced this thoughtful poem perfectly - Dreams are a harvest not a gift... The message mat be lost on the little girl in this picture, but as kids grow, repeated messages do sink in. A lesson that's been lost on much of this entitled generation coming up.
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You prefaced this thoughtful poem perfectly - Dreams are a harvest not a gift... The message mat be lost on the little girl in this picture, but as kids grow, repeated messages do sink in. A lesson that's been lost on much of this entitled generation coming up.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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Yes, dreams aren't free, are they? ;-) Thanks for stopping in on this one -- Enjoy the weekend!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The painting is beautiful and your words do it justice here as this little girl learns a new skill and has a long way to go before she has mastered it, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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The painting is beautiful and your words do it justice here as this little girl learns a new skill and has a long way to go before she has mastered it, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
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Yes, dreams aren't free, are they? ;-) Thanks for stopping in on this one, Dolly -- Enjoy the weekend!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this thought-provoking, realistic poem. Yes, parents must start teaching their kids about the future when they are young.
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this thought-provoking, realistic poem. Yes, parents must start teaching their kids about the future when they are young.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
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Yes, dreams aren't free, are they? ;-) Thanks for stopping in on this one, Janice -- Enjoy the weekend!!
Comment from Dancemom
This is a great entry for the 357 poetry contest. Your syllable count is correct. The picture you chose reminds me of my daughter. She is a dancer, but much older than this girl. She is fifteen. Your message is inspiring about how what we do today affects our future. Great job and thank you for sharing.
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This is a great entry for the 357 poetry contest. Your syllable count is correct. The picture you chose reminds me of my daughter. She is a dancer, but much older than this girl. She is fifteen. Your message is inspiring about how what we do today affects our future. Great job and thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
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Yes, dreams aren't free, are they? ;-) Thanks for stopping in on this one, Heather -- Enjoy the weekend!!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Tomorrow brings in fruition of action today, as you sow today, so you reap tomorrow, philosophy is generalized, well said, well done; pl sponsor me a m'ship; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this 3-5-7 poem.
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Tomorrow brings in fruition of action today, as you sow today, so you reap tomorrow, philosophy is generalized, well said, well done; pl sponsor me a m'ship; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this 3-5-7 poem.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
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Wow, Alcreator - what a wonderful Friday morning surprise: those stars and your comments are so very appreciated!! ;) :) Yes, dreams aren't free... thanks for stopping in on this one -- Enjoy the weekend!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-7 poem about teaching children skills of life today will make them able to own tomorrow when they start earning their skills today. A great piece of artwork to complement your poem.
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A very well-written 3-5-7 poem about teaching children skills of life today will make them able to own tomorrow when they start earning their skills today. A great piece of artwork to complement your poem.
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Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
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Yes, dreams aren't free, are they? ;-) Thanks for stopping in on this one, Sandra -- Enjoy the weekend!!