Wisdom
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Comment from lyenochka
Beautifully written, Iza! Thanks for sharing the blessings you received despite the hard season of tremendous loss. God gave you that smile from your dad. And devoted Pisa probably prayed for other kitties to take her place.
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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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Beautifully written, Iza! Thanks for sharing the blessings you received despite the hard season of tremendous loss. God gave you that smile from your dad. And devoted Pisa probably prayed for other kitties to take her place.
safe. Don't get my wrong (me)
Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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Thank you and so sorry for my delay.
Comment from elchupakabra
There are many, many typos, far too many that I'm going to point them out. If I ignore that, your voice shines through and the story itself is a good one. Thanks for sharing, good luck in the contest. Later daze.
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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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There are many, many typos, far too many that I'm going to point them out. If I ignore that, your voice shines through and the story itself is a good one. Thanks for sharing, good luck in the contest. Later daze.
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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Thank you
