Cleaning
Awareness sometimes comes late.18 total reviews
Comment from Lucy de Welles
This is lovely, Marjon. There is always the golden NOW, with it's new and fresh and unique expression. And, when mixed with the "old" scraps from your box, will bring forth a bouquet "of things both new and old.
Matthew 13:52. "...every scribe who has been trained for the kingdom of heaven is like the master of a household who brings both new and old things out of his treasure chest."
The art work so abstract and colorful--lots of creativity and hope inside of you for your "new day". The pale green, a sign of life diluting the gray of the past few years, and ever turning more green as the days move along. Contrasts well with the gray of your book poetry pages.
Well done!
Lucy
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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This is lovely, Marjon. There is always the golden NOW, with it's new and fresh and unique expression. And, when mixed with the "old" scraps from your box, will bring forth a bouquet "of things both new and old.
Matthew 13:52. "...every scribe who has been trained for the kingdom of heaven is like the master of a household who brings both new and old things out of his treasure chest."
The art work so abstract and colorful--lots of creativity and hope inside of you for your "new day". The pale green, a sign of life diluting the gray of the past few years, and ever turning more green as the days move along. Contrasts well with the gray of your book poetry pages.
Well done!
Lucy
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Lucy, thanks for this marvelous and expert review.
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Cheers!
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:))
Comment from estory
Your honest, from the heart language creates all this emotion in your poems. It is all very conversational too and so approachable for readers. I love all the images of the crumpled up pieces of paper, the poems written on pieces of toilet paper in the toilet. It really speaks of the possibilities of subject matter: all these small moments of life that we take for granted that are like little gems of sunlight coming through our windows. I have a poem in book in my portfolio called Patterns that you might like to check out. It is called Forgotten Poems and it is very much in the same line. estory
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Your honest, from the heart language creates all this emotion in your poems. It is all very conversational too and so approachable for readers. I love all the images of the crumpled up pieces of paper, the poems written on pieces of toilet paper in the toilet. It really speaks of the possibilities of subject matter: all these small moments of life that we take for granted that are like little gems of sunlight coming through our windows. I have a poem in book in my portfolio called Patterns that you might like to check out. It is called Forgotten Poems and it is very much in the same line. estory
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Estory. I will check it out, your Forgotten Poems.
Comment from Jg
We all continue to realize the bliss of poetry during this dull times . Excellent poem . I love how it tells the speaker's love developing for poetry from the early stages , well written too . Good job
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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We all continue to realize the bliss of poetry during this dull times . Excellent poem . I love how it tells the speaker's love developing for poetry from the early stages , well written too . Good job
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you very much for the review!
Comment from elchupakabra
I think that this is a nice free verse style piece, I think your voice definitely shines through in this work. Good work overall and thank you for sharing. Later daze.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I think that this is a nice free verse style piece, I think your voice definitely shines through in this work. Good work overall and thank you for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thanks a lot for your review.
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Very beautiful poem and so accurate about the writing. I have already pulled the car over to write something down. I hate it when I wake up in the middle of the night, have the start, a really good start, too lazy to get up, and the next morning GONE. But aware that you had something really great. I am going to get a tape recorder to put by my bed because this has happened numerous times. Damn.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Very beautiful poem and so accurate about the writing. I have already pulled the car over to write something down. I hate it when I wake up in the middle of the night, have the start, a really good start, too lazy to get up, and the next morning GONE. But aware that you had something really great. I am going to get a tape recorder to put by my bed because this has happened numerous times. Damn.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Becky, thanks for this review. So you know, what I am talking about. Lol.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Sometimes it takes a big jolt to open your eyes to what actually is. But, we have to want Him to come into our heart, we cannot leave everything up to Him, that was why He gave us the freedom of choice. I'm so happy for you, Marjon, now you will never be alone. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Sometimes it takes a big jolt to open your eyes to what actually is. But, we have to want Him to come into our heart, we cannot leave everything up to Him, that was why He gave us the freedom of choice. I'm so happy for you, Marjon, now you will never be alone. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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No, I'm not alone. I feel His presence in me, His love warms me and gives me courage. Thanks, Sandra.
Comment from roof35
This is well written with no errors and it has a strong message. I am not sure I get the relevance of the illustration. Your faith shines through this work. Nicely done.
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This is well written with no errors and it has a strong message. I am not sure I get the relevance of the illustration. Your faith shines through this work. Nicely done.
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you, for the review. May I ask why Average, when you say it is well-written, no errors and a strong message? Nicely done, too?
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You certainly can ask. I meant to give you five stars. I am so sorry. I have gone in and updated it to five stars. I think my age is showing--I have done this twice in the last month. Again, apologies and I fixed it.
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Ooooh, that's a relief. I hoped it was a mistake and I wondered: why did she like it, and gave only three stars? Maybe she didn't like it at all...No apologies needed. Thanks!
Comment from BethShelby
This is a beautiful testimony. Sometimes it takes a long time to realize how much God loves us. Grief is crippling but faith in God and knowing he has the best in mine for us is comforting. It is relief to know we have a friend who will never leave us.
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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This is a beautiful testimony. Sometimes it takes a long time to realize how much God loves us. Grief is crippling but faith in God and knowing he has the best in mine for us is comforting. It is relief to know we have a friend who will never leave us.
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Thank you, Beth, for the review.