Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Sweet Tooth"My book of poems and stories
15 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest is delicious, Mystery Writer. Great job with its presentation--correct syllable count per line, perfect art choice, color scheme that is inviting, and a true message.
Best wishes.
ð???Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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Your contest is delicious, Mystery Writer. Great job with its presentation--correct syllable count per line, perfect art choice, color scheme that is inviting, and a true message.
Best wishes.
ð???Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I cannot even pass the bakery at Walmart without sniffing twice. Thanks for reviewing this one. I had no trouble connecting a picture to this post...lol
Comment from Sally Law
I wish I did t nave I e but I do. I especially love fruit and chocolate. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sal XOs....
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I wish I did t nave I e but I do. I especially love fruit and chocolate. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sal XOs....
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I cannot even pass the bakery at Walmart without sniffing twice. Thanks for reviewing this one. I had no trouble connecting a picture to this post...lol
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem contest.
Now if you could hand out some free samples
it would be even better.
Excellent rhymes and syllable count.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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This is an excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem contest.
Now if you could hand out some free samples
it would be even better.
Excellent rhymes and syllable count.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I cannot even pass the bakery at Walmart without sniffing twice. Thanks for reviewing this one. I had no trouble connecting a picture to this post...lol
Comment from Melodie Michelle
EXCELLENT poem for the 1-6-1 contest entry;-) Best of wishes for the win! I adored the word flow and sometimes these short poems don't make sense but yours did!
Thank you for sharing;-)
Many blessings to you and your family;-)
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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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EXCELLENT poem for the 1-6-1 contest entry;-) Best of wishes for the win! I adored the word flow and sometimes these short poems don't make sense but yours did!
Thank you for sharing;-)
Many blessings to you and your family;-)
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
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I cannot even pass the bakery at Walmart without sniffing twice. Thanks for reviewing this one. I had no trouble connecting a picture to this post...lol
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Comment from zanya
OH yes how delicious and inviting that shop window looks - difficult to pass it by - well portrayed here in this short format of 1-6-1 and with fluid rhyme
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OH yes how delicious and inviting that shop window looks - difficult to pass it by - well portrayed here in this short format of 1-6-1 and with fluid rhyme
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2020
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I cannot even pass the bakery at Walmart without sniffing twice. Thanks for reviewing this one. I had no trouble connecting a picture to this post...lol