Dance Hall Daze
Get lost in the colorful rhythm...22 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
The colors surrounding this flamenco dancer mirrors the Autumn hues of falling leaves and also their movement as they fall to the ground.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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The colors surrounding this flamenco dancer mirrors the Autumn hues of falling leaves and also their movement as they fall to the ground.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much!!
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You are most kindly welcome.
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this vividly descriptive, delightful piece. Personification and metaphor serve well to convey your message.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this vividly descriptive, delightful piece. Personification and metaphor serve well to convey your message.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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What a wonderful review, Janice - THANK YOU!! You brought a bit of sunshine to peek through this endless cloud cover over here, so big ol' smiles right back atcha! Take care and enjoy the weekend!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the imagery.
-I like the comparison of
autumn to a dance, and the
alliteration adds to that feeling
of "Autumn's sashay."
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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-Great artwork and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the imagery.
-I like the comparison of
autumn to a dance, and the
alliteration adds to that feeling
of "Autumn's sashay."
-A very good concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Dance Hall Daze
Hello anonymous
Beautiful presentation, I love the Spanish dancer and the color scheme. Excellent entry for the Ode To Autumn writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Dance Hall Daze
Hello anonymous
Beautiful presentation, I love the Spanish dancer and the color scheme. Excellent entry for the Ode To Autumn writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Not sure these words flow so well, (having two (in) close together maybe the problem. Perhaps swap the first (in) to (by). "Autumn sashays by"
I felt the movement here in the dance as Autumn sheds her leaves, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Not sure these words flow so well, (having two (in) close together maybe the problem. Perhaps swap the first (in) to (by). "Autumn sashays by"
I felt the movement here in the dance as Autumn sheds her leaves, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Dolly, for the honest review - much appreciated!!
Comment from palmart
Good wording and description in such little amount of syllables! Great choice of picture and, let me say, it makes me resemble of Spain as her dress` colours (mostly) are like its flag: Red and yellow
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Good wording and description in such little amount of syllables! Great choice of picture and, let me say, it makes me resemble of Spain as her dress` colours (mostly) are like its flag: Red and yellow
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much!
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You´re very welcome!
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was a gorgeous rendition to the contest. I liked the metaphor "autumn sashays". Excellent descriptive imagery and an award winning artwork to compliment your poem. I think this should make a prime contender in this contest, good luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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This was a gorgeous rendition to the contest. I liked the metaphor "autumn sashays". Excellent descriptive imagery and an award winning artwork to compliment your poem. I think this should make a prime contender in this contest, good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much!
Comment from donette1914
very cleaver on ode to Autumn and her dance fever
very well written and your words flow so well on this well penned poem, very creative and believable
the artwork went very well to make this come to life
I hope the very best in contest
it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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very cleaver on ode to Autumn and her dance fever
very well written and your words flow so well on this well penned poem, very creative and believable
the artwork went very well to make this come to life
I hope the very best in contest
it was a pleasure
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is well-done, Mystery Writer. The syllable count is correct per line, the image is great, the color scheme works well, and your personification of Autumn is understood--the season and the possible name of the dancer.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Your contest entry is well-done, Mystery Writer. The syllable count is correct per line, the image is great, the color scheme works well, and your personification of Autumn is understood--the season and the possible name of the dancer.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Calling the Autumn as a lady's dance fever is so creative. I love it, the poem and the art. As you usual you impressed me with a beautiful piece of art, too. I have to ask you the secret. Where did you find these wonderful art works?
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Calling the Autumn as a lady's dance fever is so creative. I love it, the poem and the art. As you usual you impressed me with a beautiful piece of art, too. I have to ask you the secret. Where did you find these wonderful art works?
Comment Written 25-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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What an awesome review, Lisa - THANK YOU!! And the artwork? That's always the last piece of a posting for me: I write the poem and then go looking for a pic... the new old fashioned way, I guess. I have a certain thing in mind (but I'm never rigid about it) and go to Google images and search on the overall mood of my poem or key phrases and see what comes up. Sometimes it takes multiple searches until I find what 'clicks' for me.... Don't know if that actually helps, but that really is what I do! ;) :) Take care this weekend!! ;)
