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Comment from rjuselius
"imagining life
in shining sweet full moon yet
not out of cocoon"
i wish i was so safe as in my mother's womb. nice one:)
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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"imagining life
in shining sweet full moon yet
not out of cocoon"
i wish i was so safe as in my mother's womb. nice one:)
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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Its good to know you liked it.a hearty thanks for your sweet views and wishes:-)
Comment from NicciFaye
I can really say......I know what you mean friend. One of my fav sayings is life is but a moment...as short as your poem is but packed with great insight, this is wonderfully written...the harsh realities of life come like a flood....but God has a way of always calming life's storms...
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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I can really say......I know what you mean friend. One of my fav sayings is life is but a moment...as short as your poem is but packed with great insight, this is wonderfully written...the harsh realities of life come like a flood....but God has a way of always calming life's storms...
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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Your comments are highly motivatin.i respect and praise your kind review to my first write here.thanks a lot for reading and your views:-)
Comment from persevere
These few , well chosen words in your haiku are thought provoking. I guess our view of the world depended on the quality of our cocoon. However, your message is clear in that those rose tinted glasses of youth fall away as we face the realities of the world.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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These few , well chosen words in your haiku are thought provoking. I guess our view of the world depended on the quality of our cocoon. However, your message is clear in that those rose tinted glasses of youth fall away as we face the realities of the world.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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I appreciate your insight review of the write.what you said is really true.thanks for your positive feedback
Comment from Titan Black
I like the concept and idea of this poem.
Even though it would look more like a Haiku
if you were to put the word 'In' on the first
line. But you did a good job. Keep up the good
Work.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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I like the concept and idea of this poem.
Even though it would look more like a Haiku
if you were to put the word 'In' on the first
line. But you did a good job. Keep up the good
Work.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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Glad you liked it.thanks for your kind review
Comment from Black_Oxygen
imagining life
in shining sweet full moon yet
not out of cocoon
With very few words, this poetry speaks an undeniable
truth. The attached photo is a giant mirror that reflects
the message. Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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imagining life
in shining sweet full moon yet
not out of cocoon
With very few words, this poetry speaks an undeniable
truth. The attached photo is a giant mirror that reflects
the message. Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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I am happy that you liked it.thanks for your words
Comment from yachtworknz
How nice was that? Great photo also.
imagining life
in shining sweet full moon yet
not out of cocoon
Yes, very nice. Thanks!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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How nice was that? Great photo also.
imagining life
in shining sweet full moon yet
not out of cocoon
Yes, very nice. Thanks!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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Whanks for sharing your view:-)
Comment from poetbear
The butterfly needs to fly.
The child is always with you but their work must be done because it isn't fair to the adult they have becme.
This is well written and yet very melancholy.
Many will relate.
Creative and original piece with great image and imagery.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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The butterfly needs to fly.
The child is always with you but their work must be done because it isn't fair to the adult they have becme.
This is well written and yet very melancholy.
Many will relate.
Creative and original piece with great image and imagery.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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Thanks for an insight review:-)
Comment from RKagan
I read your poem and your author notes. You are so right. It's true, when we are young we want so much to get out of the cocoon and live. But as we get older we wish we could go back in. Great poem. with a lot to say.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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I read your poem and your author notes. You are so right. It's true, when we are young we want so much to get out of the cocoon and live. But as we get older we wish we could go back in. Great poem. with a lot to say.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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Thanks for your wonderful review:-)
Comment from donaldww
This poem satisfies the rules of the 5-7-5 contest. The syllable count is perfect and the cocoon metaphor well known.
Good luck with the contest.
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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This poem satisfies the rules of the 5-7-5 contest. The syllable count is perfect and the cocoon metaphor well known.
Good luck with the contest.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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Thanks for yor your review and best wishes
Comment from pumkin2866
This kind of poem is new to me or at least the name as I have no formal training. I like it, made me think, am I imagining life in shining sweet full moon yet not out of cocoon.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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This kind of poem is new to me or at least the name as I have no formal training. I like it, made me think, am I imagining life in shining sweet full moon yet not out of cocoon.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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Thanks for your words:-)