Comment from emjaihammond

Excellent

Wow!
That is a good poem. I didn't understand at first but then read your notes. Very imaginative and great poetic art. I think your piece shows great imagination and a flair for the dramatic. Good job.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from TOMORAL

Excellent

I love the phrase of love being described as "life liquor". This is a excellent 5-7-5 poem. You have a definite gift with poetry. This picture complements the poem with excellence.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from NicciFaye

Excellent

Hello Anupam...I thought this was a decent poem...the picture compliments the 5/7/5 (non-traditional Haiku according to content rules)...I thought the poem it self was good...great alliteration...not sure if its overpowering or too much...I like vampires as a thrill...you get a five for creativeness....

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from gazzagodbod

Excellent

wow what stunning picture and presentation you have used great little poem i would rather see the text centered but thats just me gazza

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

YOWZA! What a powerful little poem you've penned, my friend! Fabulous alliteration too - with so much of it, one would think it might sound forced, but your does not! It's great, and I loved it!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Jonez08

Excellent

A very dark and alluring poem, which brings a blood thirsty image to mind. I like the word choice (lusty leeches) and my favorite is the last verse. Dark. Good luck in the contest.

Cassandra

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Curt Winslow

Excellent

I think if vampires were even real I would not want to be one. The thought of living forever while my loved ones and friends die all around me doesn't appeal to me. Great job!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made effective use of every syllable and creative use of alliteration in this 5-7-5 that speaks of the legend of the vampire.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from david bell

Excellent

Some people are like vampires. All they want to do is take and takes some more. I think you did a very good job in a type of poetry that I don't do.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

Comment from Laurie Clayton

Exceptional

I really enjoyed the imagery of this short piece. I think that you have captured the dark, sensual and erotic nature very well.

Thank you for sharing,

Best wishes,

Laurie

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013

Aww..that's so sweet of you.i appreciate your words.Thanks for your kind words and excellent review:-)

reply by Laurie Clayton on 08-Jul-2013

You're welcome.