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Trysts at Dawn

ABC Poetry

33 total reviews 
Comment from DonandVicki
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Most ABC poetry can seem forced but you not only made your poem flow smoothly but you created a very vivid scenario with your well chosen words. Don

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
    Hello Don. Thank you so much!!

    Melissa
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Lovely image, Melissa.
-You wrote a very good
poem with a good topic
and effective imagery.
-My favorite line is the second one.
-You paint a vivid word
picture of the sunrise, and
the beginning of a new day.
-I like the concluding line, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
    Hi Pam. Thanks so much. I am glad you enjoyed it.

    Melissa
reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Mar-2021
    You are welcome, Melissa.
Comment from zanya
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Such a beautiful time of day, 'early dawn' celebrated here with all it's newness and promise of what is to come - enhanced with 'trysts shared with my muse'

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
    Thanks so much Zanya!

    Melissa
Comment from kahpot
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Just beautiful, your words tell of a whole day/days in a few lines, an excellent abc poem, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
    Hello kahpot... thanks so very much!! Btw, I feel like you may have told me your name in the past, but it has slipped my mind ... sorry... could you share it with me again? :)

    Melissa
reply by kahpot on 21-Mar-2021
    Certainly Melissa, my name is Kym-the male version Ha! Ha!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
    Thank you Kym... I am acquainted with two gentlemen who share your name. :). My father is named Carroll... the male version ;). M
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a nicely written ABC poem. It has a nice rhyme. Very beautiful photo as well to compliment your words. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
    Hi Joanne. Thank you for your lovely review!!

    Melissa
Comment from Boogienights
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This is a lovely poem about moments shared. I'll bet the ideas flowed after that, inspired by the beauty around you. A great contest entry. Thanks for sharing and good luck. :)

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
    Hello Sharon... thanks so much for your lovely comments!! :)

    Melissa
Comment from Susan Larson
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What a lovely ABC poem with all five lines in alphabetical order! I absolutely love your final line! "Enchanting trysts shared with my muse."
Wishing you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
    Hello Susan. Thanks so very much. :)

    Melissa
Comment from Raul1
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It is interesting that you included the summer in your ABCD poem. I can vision the sunshine reflected in the river. I think that it's written well. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
    Hello Raul. Thanks so much. I really appreciate your comments on this ABC poem. :)

    Melissa
reply by Raul1 on 21-Mar-2021
    You're welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Your muse here is the early morning dewy dawn with those bedazzled drops that quench the plants and flowers bringing life into view here, much enjoyed Melissa, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
    Hi Dolly. Thanks so much. I had fun, but that ABC sequence really challenged me today. :)

    Melissa
Comment from Pantygynt
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A splendid little ABC at the dawning of the day. Is early dawn a tautology? Dawn is an event occurring at a specific time. Can it, therefore, be early or for that matter late? just a thought. Cloudless perhaps if you feel it needs a double syllable to preserve its rhythm or chilly perhaps.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2021
    Hi Jim. Thanks!! trying to set a scene of those very early beams of sunlight. :). Hope you are doing wonderfully well.

    Melissa