Comment from
Robert Zimmerman
Hello Iza.
This is excellent satire. You told the story with emotion and from a perspective of someone that questions all of the things governments have done to control their populations. We all have to wonder, "What's next?"
Robert
Comment Written 01-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 03-Nov-2021
Comment from
Elizabeth Emerald
You nailed it! Devastating indictment of the craziness.
against my believes=>BELIEFS
prescribe myself a doctor=>DOCTOR'S note
Since we are vaccinated should we not rise=>RAISE UP those ... shields
Congrats Mr. Government, you succeed [to unite stupidly=>IN UNITING STUPIDITY] under the name of so-called protection. Congrats, now families are fighting with each other about the vaccination status and who can visit and who [is not=>CANNOT].
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
Hi Liz:) thank you so much for your grammar corrections you are the best. love yaaaaaaaa