Tales of our Times
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26 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
You have done an amazing job with the writing prompt. To tell a story in seventy-five words is no easy task. I enjoyed your short, creative writing. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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You have done an amazing job with the writing prompt. To tell a story in seventy-five words is no easy task. I enjoyed your short, creative writing. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Great review zanya
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a clever story and it made me chuckle. I guess this is a world in which pretty much anything can be purchased--even an egg from a donor with blue blood! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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This is a clever story and it made me chuckle. I guess this is a world in which pretty much anything can be purchased--even an egg from a donor with blue blood! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Great -glad you enjoyed it ! zanya
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You are welcome.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and story to go with it, zanya.
-You have a good opening hook, and you
follow that with his desire to have an heir,
but his age was against that happening.
-I like the ending because it is unexpected
and makes me smile.
-Very well done; good luck in the contest.
-Beautiful flowers in your profile pic, too.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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-Good artwork and story to go with it, zanya.
-You have a good opening hook, and you
follow that with his desire to have an heir,
but his age was against that happening.
-I like the ending because it is unexpected
and makes me smile.
-Very well done; good luck in the contest.
-Beautiful flowers in your profile pic, too.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Great review -glad you enjoyed it zanya
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You are very welcome, zanya.
Comment from pookietoo
Humorous Flash fiction story. It brought a smile to my face. Best of luck in the contest. Keep writing wonderful poems and sharing them. ð??? Have a nice day.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Humorous Flash fiction story. It brought a smile to my face. Best of luck in the contest. Keep writing wonderful poems and sharing them. ð??? Have a nice day.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
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Welcome.
Comment from royowen
The secret of writing these short , Flash fiction stories is to embellish the narrative is to have a great conclusion, something like the haiku satori, and you've certainly done that Zanya, well done, good look, blessings Roy
Typo : A(t) fifty something
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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The secret of writing these short , Flash fiction stories is to embellish the narrative is to have a great conclusion, something like the haiku satori, and you've certainly done that Zanya, well done, good look, blessings Roy
Typo : A(t) fifty something
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Great reveiw -zanya
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Most welcome
Comment from jessizero
This was a very interesting story, to say the least. I didn't expect Sir Edward to seek out an egg donor with "blue blood." Maybe romance is dead, or at least inconvenient. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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This was a very interesting story, to say the least. I didn't expect Sir Edward to seek out an egg donor with "blue blood." Maybe romance is dead, or at least inconvenient. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Yes -great reveiw zanya