Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

My favorite time of you and you have captured everything that I love about autumn in this short Haiku. A very good entry for the contest. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023

Thank you, Ginda!

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

I am loving this short haiku contest, seeing what impression writers give me in just a few syllables.
I like yours because I can hear and feel the moment. It's the crunch that I like.
It's 103 degrees here today. I am ready for the stroll.
Nice job.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023

Thank you so much! Xo

Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Excellent

Firstly, I Hate giving out 4 stars! Bear with me a moment though. I sponsored this contest so I feel I have to review everyone that entered. If you check the prompt requirements it mentions that you have to follow the short-long-short pattern. First line, short, second line, longer and the last line, short.
This is perfectly lovely and it's not the poem that is the concern.
You have your poem backwards (so to speak). You have 3-1-3.
You can easily rearrange and edit so it fits the short-long-short pattern called for. Most haiku are 5-7-5.
Message me when you've edited and I will upgrade your rating.
Luv & stuff,
Katiemaedead

Beautiful! I upgraded your rating.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

I'm sorry, I didn't see those requirements! I will look again. Will revise, thanks for the heads up.

reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023

Revised. Thanks again! :)

reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023

Thank you!!:)

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
puts the poem all together! On these hot days here in Florida the
author's words made me think of how much I miss autumn! The artwork
is lovely and compliments the theme and words of this poem.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023

Thank you so much! Xo

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your excellent work! I particularly likethat in the fewesr syllables you were able to create imagery end even sound.

Best wishes!
Alexandra

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023

Thank you so much! Xo

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

You give us a great glimpse of nature. The leaves are falling and crunch underfoot as we choose to stroll down the path. Excellent choice of colors and picture to support your verse. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023

Thank you so much! Xo

Comment from Lee, Undone

Excellent

Very on point would be a good concept for a type of children's book to understanding physical audio and visual associations with different seasons and remembering them perhaps.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023

Thank you so much! Xo

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 3-1-3, Fall Footsteps, has the proper formatting and adds the audible proof that the leaves which have left the trees are still underfoot and having their final say.

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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2023

Thank you so much! Xo

Comment from JSD

Excellent

Lovely evocation of the season in a few well chosen words/syllables. Well done. The 'crunch' in the middle of this is inspired. I hope that you do well in the competition.

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 Comment Written 22-Aug-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023

Thank you so much, John!
Xo