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Mistaken Identity

150 word flash fiction for contest

26 total reviews 
Comment from patcelaw
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This is very well written I enjoyed the read. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I also wish you the best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless your holiday. Patricia .

 Comment Written 26-May-2024


reply by the author on 26-May-2024
    Thank you Patricia. I'm really appreciate the review.
    Beth
Comment from Spitfire
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I've heard everyone has a double. This story proves it. I like that Paige faked it and that the two women shared a table even after the gal realized her mistake.

 Comment Written 26-May-2024


reply by the author on 31-May-2024
    Thank you for the review. I'm been told many times I have a double but I've never seen her. A lot of people think they know and when I around where I get up, they usually do. It is me that can't figure out who they are.
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
    Thank you for the review. I'm been told many times I have a double but I've never seen her. A lot of people think they know and when I around where I get up, they usually do. It is me that can't figure out who they are.
Comment from Ben Colder
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What about these two air heads but yet it does happen. I have mistaken for some else, but it always ended in a laugh. Good one, Beth. I hope they got it together.

 Comment Written 26-May-2024


reply by the author on 26-May-2024
    I actaully had a woman think I was her ex-sister-in-law and I was trying to pretend I knew her becuase she was acting like she knew me.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That was so funny, in fact it was me. I'm always doing that and continuing in the hope they will give me a clue. It never happens. At least they ended up with a dinner companion. LOL Well done, Beth, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 26-May-2024


reply by the author on 31-May-2024
    Thank you Sandra. I pleased you found it funny. I can remembre who many time's I've try to pretent I know someone when I haven't a clue.
    Beth
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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I could see that happening because I see familiarity in more faces than not, especially ith actors on television. It drives my wife battey and me as well for she rarely see the options I give to her.

 Comment Written 26-May-2024


reply by the author on 30-May-2024
    Thanks Tom. I have a lot of trouble with faces. It they are like know, I assume they do and I fake it trying to get a clue.
    Beth
Comment from Begin Again
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I'm the opposite...I remember faces but not names or sometimes where I know them from. When I owned the business I saw many faces every day, but couldn't remember their names. Ugh! Great story for the flash fiction contest, Beth. Maybe she made a friend!
Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 26-May-2024


reply by the author on 30-May-2024
    I have trouble with names too but I'm pretty good recognizing voices on the phone.
    Beth
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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What is a "150 wird?"

Comical they did not know each other though they thought they did.

May as well eat together. Who knows, perhaps they will become bosom buddies because of the experience.

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 Comment Written 26-May-2024


reply by the author on 30-May-2024
    Thank Brett. It is hard to believe something like that could happen but once I had a woman start a conversation with me and I went along because she acted like she knew me but she though I was her ex sister-in-law. She swore I had a double.