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The Eleventh Hour

At the Heart of It

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Comment from Catherine Deslippe
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I love how you were able to bring a demon and an angel into your story. How one takes one life yet the evil doesn't win, the angel gets the spirit. Well done with great writing skills.

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 Comment Written 23-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
    Thank you so very much, Catherine! Glad you liked it.
reply by Catherine Deslippe on 23-Jul-2024
    Thank you Maddy, Im glad you enjoyed my poem. Sadly jealousy does pop up.