The power
The truth50 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
And your words are poignant and honest here Wendy. Nature has a way of carving pretty pictures for us and we admire what we say and words, when used wisely can soothe and also tell some home truths, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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And your words are poignant and honest here Wendy. Nature has a way of carving pretty pictures for us and we admire what we say and words, when used wisely can soothe and also tell some home truths, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much Dolly. Yes, words are such powerful influencers, both positive and negative, particularly over children, and their self-esteem. I greatly appreciate your review.
Wendy
Comment from Colorado Owl
So well said! As a poet you know how much power words have, and you choose them well. If only more people would pause and think before they send out words that can destroy. Thank you for your poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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So well said! As a poet you know how much power words have, and you choose them well. If only more people would pause and think before they send out words that can destroy. Thank you for your poem.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you so very much! You are right. The power of words, both to destroy and to heal, is enormous, immeasurable. Many thanks for the six stars. I am both delighted and honoured.
Wendy
Comment from juliaSjames
Brilliant thought provoking entry for the contest, Wendy. The second line is especially potent on a writer's site but it has universal application. It's strange but I recall critical words about me much more clearly than compliments. That's why I make an effort to watch my words, in particular when I speak to my grandkids or convey information in writing.
The first line is the imagery against which the second line is measured. It's stunning in its power. Almost frightening. Especially in these times of coastal erosion due to global warming.
I hope this entry does well. Kudos, Wendy
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Brilliant thought provoking entry for the contest, Wendy. The second line is especially potent on a writer's site but it has universal application. It's strange but I recall critical words about me much more clearly than compliments. That's why I make an effort to watch my words, in particular when I speak to my grandkids or convey information in writing.
The first line is the imagery against which the second line is measured. It's stunning in its power. Almost frightening. Especially in these times of coastal erosion due to global warming.
I hope this entry does well. Kudos, Wendy
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Julia, for this very supportive and encouraging review. Your thoughts are insightful, and I appreciate your good wishes as well.
Wendy
Comment from BethShelby
This so true. It is good sure of your six words. I think it is profound to compare the word with waves on a shoreline. Good luck in the contest. This should do well.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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This so true. It is good sure of your six words. I think it is profound to compare the word with waves on a shoreline. Good luck in the contest. This should do well.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you Beth, for your very kind review and for the good wishes. Much appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from royowen
They do indeed, what we say to a child will probably stay with them fo life, and a the waves of the sea certainly shape the shoreline and can certainly shape its future, also the bible says that words have the power of life and death, good luck Wendy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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They do indeed, what we say to a child will probably stay with them fo life, and a the waves of the sea certainly shape the shoreline and can certainly shape its future, also the bible says that words have the power of life and death, good luck Wendy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much Roy, for your thoughtful review. I always appreciate it.
Wendy
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Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Oooh! That's an excellent six word poem! You use a metaphor of the waves changing the shoreline for the words that can shape our thought life and view of ourselves in life. Hope this does well in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Oooh! That's an excellent six word poem! You use a metaphor of the waves changing the shoreline for the words that can shape our thought life and view of ourselves in life. Hope this does well in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much Helen! I am glad you liked this one, and thank you for the support and encouragement.
Wendy
Comment from zanya
Yes and oh how effective these succinct and shorter poetic forms can be and this is an example of that - sometimes we don't fully appreciate the powerful impact of our words.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Yes and oh how effective these succinct and shorter poetic forms can be and this is an example of that - sometimes we don't fully appreciate the powerful impact of our words.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much Zanya! Thoughtful wand true reviewing words. Glad you liked it.
Wendy
Comment from BOO ghost
Beautiful azure presentation! The words match. Blue. Waves do shape shorelines. Glaciers shape the earth. Takes millions of years of evolution. See you are a word weaver. Only thing about words in any book is you gotta check the authenticity and get proof that the words aren't made up by man. Very nice looking poem!
BOO!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Beautiful azure presentation! The words match. Blue. Waves do shape shorelines. Glaciers shape the earth. Takes millions of years of evolution. See you are a word weaver. Only thing about words in any book is you gotta check the authenticity and get proof that the words aren't made up by man. Very nice looking poem!
BOO!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for reviewing, and you are absolutely right.Much appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
I love how your six-word poem draws such a deep connection between nature and our lives. The way you compare the shaping of shorelines by waves to how words shape our lives is really powerful. It makes me think about how both natural forces and the things we say have such a lasting impact. Your poem beautifully captures this idea with just a few words, and it really resonated with me.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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I love how your six-word poem draws such a deep connection between nature and our lives. The way you compare the shaping of shorelines by waves to how words shape our lives is really powerful. It makes me think about how both natural forces and the things we say have such a lasting impact. Your poem beautifully captures this idea with just a few words, and it really resonated with me.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for this delightful review. I am so pleased it resonated. The power of both positive and negative words is enormous, sometimes life-changing.
Wendy
Comment from karenina
So well said, Wendy! This is one of those I read and then I sit back and think "I wish I'd thought of that!"--
(Smiling here)
The perfect metaphor!
If this isn't a contender, people better start reading every entry as they should be!
Karenina
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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So well said, Wendy! This is one of those I read and then I sit back and think "I wish I'd thought of that!"--
(Smiling here)
The perfect metaphor!
If this isn't a contender, people better start reading every entry as they should be!
Karenina
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Lol. Your writing is always brilliant. Thanks so much for your thoughtful and caring review. Always valued.
Wendy
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Have a lovely day!
